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Array ( [sid] => 145038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => who and I? [time] => 2008-09-09 08:07:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You ask who I am
You ask is our love matter
Who am I?
these question make my heart shatter
Why does it matter
I gave you everything you could want
But since your going to ask lets bring everything up front

Who's the guy that your cheating on
is it me or is it him
did you think i was dim
i saw it all
you think i'm blind
unlike you i can get things through my mind
And i hope in time you'll get this

Who i was was your turtle dove
I thought that me and you where true love
But then i found i was blind
you back stabbed me and left my side

to find another man
I guess it was money
since i ran out
That's when the fights started and you started to shout
But you could have stayed and the relationship wouldn't have got bloody
I'll go up and tell the man
all she wants is your money
and that'll ruin your plans
Since you left me in the dark blindly
I'm now what and who i am
I am now your enemy i want nothing to do with
you we're through
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
who and I?

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 08:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You ask who I am
You ask is our love matter
Who am I?
these question make my heart shatter
Why does it matter
I gave you everything you could want
But since your going to ask lets bring everything up front

Who's the guy that your cheating on
is it me or is it him
did you think i was dim
i saw it all
you think i'm blind
unlike you i can get things through my mind
And i hope in time you'll get this

Who i was was your turtle dove
I thought that me and you where true love
But then i found i was blind
you back stabbed me and left my side

to find another man
I guess it was money
since i ran out
That's when the fights started and you started to shout
But you could have stayed and the relationship wouldn't have got bloody
I'll go up and tell the man
all she wants is your money
and that'll ruin your plans
Since you left me in the dark blindly
I'm now what and who i am
I am now your enemy i want nothing to do with
you we're through




Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-09-09 08:07:41]
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Re: who and I? (User Rating: 1 )
by redsleeve on Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 08:16:49 AM AEST
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i went with a girl who had a boyfriend once, i found that if she cheated on him to be with me, what is to stop her from cheating on me to be with someone else. no trust in these situations. i think you're doing the right thing, just forget about her.

great write.

d


Re: who and I? (User Rating: 1 )
by fredmonte101 on Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 11:34:22 AM AEST
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Wonder if a lot of us get hurt that way? Hope you are doing better? God bless you and be with you.




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