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Array ( [sid] => 14499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => another´s eyes [time] => 2003-03-18 16:45:00 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote while I was baby-sitting my younger siblings. we were in the park and they were playing. I was sittin on the steps and was looking out on the people there .And it just came to me. [bodytext] => If I looked through another´s eyes
would I truly like what I see
the person I appear to others
the person I seem to be

would I see the caring I feel
would I know what is in my heart
or would I just be another face
eyes un-met in a crouded space

would I give me a chance
or be put of the visual
would I laugh at my jokes
and find me acceptable

would I laugh at my dreams
that now, to me are important
would I think me strange
andd slightly deranged

I like to belive I would like me
to have as a best friend
someone I could count on
someone trust-worthy to the end [comments] => 6 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 21 [informant] => kolbrun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

another´s eyes

Contributed by kolbrun on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I looked through another´s eyes
would I truly like what I see
the person I appear to others
the person I seem to be

would I see the caring I feel
would I know what is in my heart
or would I just be another face
eyes un-met in a crouded space

would I give me a chance
or be put of the visual
would I laugh at my jokes
and find me acceptable

would I laugh at my dreams
that now, to me are important
would I think me strange
andd slightly deranged

I like to belive I would like me
to have as a best friend
someone I could count on
someone trust-worthy to the end

Copyright Â© kolbrun ... [ 2003-03-18 16:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 06:36:30 PM AEST
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ohh, this is so interesting to me, i had two thoughts, one the person walking by was a stranger, would they know or care to know anything about you as a person, and second, it was like you walked by your 'self' and wanted to be friends, in which you would have had a lifelong friendship, a very good thing indeed, great write, *hugs* nessa

Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by venus86 on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:04:16 AM AEST
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Hello Kolbrún, it's so nice to see you back here..I missed reading your poetry very much.
I love this...and it's very inspiring ending.

elly XX

Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:05:46 AM AEST
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Been here recently, and before. As elly said, there are just those times when you're just living. If this was personal I hope you guys make it through.:)

Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:28:08 PM AEST
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this is an excellent work. tis very well-written and thought provoking. best wishes to you!
kara

Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:32:32 PM AEST
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A very good introspective thought and excellent poem. All that detracts are a few errors in typing or spelling so be sure you proof read. However, the greatest importance is in the creativity from your inspired thoughts. I enjoy your poems alot. bizzy

Re: another´s eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:01:08 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking.......but to a large extent we are very similar to one another. Our senses cannot differ greatly or we would not survive. The same would be our fate if our intelligence and/or physique was impaired.

It is only in our experience and imagination that we can tolerate wider differences.

Well you have been getting to know yourself very well for some time and I'm sure are going to be very successfull. Most of us seem to manage that, even some of the ones that occupy separate bodies.

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