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Array ( [sid] => 144893 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silly Girl [time] => 2008-09-03 08:02:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m sorry for messing with your head
I’m sorry for the things that were said
I apologize for looking alive when I feel dead
I regret nothing
I open up to you, here, instead

I contemplate retreat
I beg at your feet
I want you need
I want us to be
Together
Harmoniously
Living free

Lovingly tender
Furiously pleasured
A daunting endeavor
A love that is clever
I reach for you
In the end
I ask only to be remembered

________
_____ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Jyssvw22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Silly Girl

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 08:02:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I’m sorry for messing with your head
I’m sorry for the things that were said
I apologize for looking alive when I feel dead
I regret nothing
I open up to you, here, instead

I contemplate retreat
I beg at your feet
I want you need
I want us to be
Together
Harmoniously
Living free

Lovingly tender
Furiously pleasured
A daunting endeavor
A love that is clever
I reach for you
In the end
I ask only to be remembered

________
_____

Copyright Â© Jyssvw22 ... [ 2008-09-03 08:02:13]
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Re: Silly Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:50:59 PM AEST
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Wow, Jyss, a song for the ages. Like a lonely star in a black sky
there is a plead for more and nothing, if you know what I mean.
I adore the last stanza. The emotion inside of it is tremendously
full. And the last line is subtly humble. Beautiful work, jyss.

As always ~

~ Breezy

Re: Silly Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 03:00:40 AM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

Re: Silly Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:16:18 AM AEST
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The cool sarcasm is free flowing here, and as per usual it is furiously defending your meek heart.
A relatable theme to us all, and don't we all hope to leave a lasting impression?

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