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Beauty
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:23:34 AM in AEST
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Hellenic beauty is all that I see
Her eyes as green as the Aegean Sea
Lips of a muse that stills my heart
Hair of Helios makes me shudder and start
She sees not the majesty that I see
She is all, to whom I flee
My master, my lover, umbilical to home
Hers is a comeliness I wish was my own
One kiss, and embrace, to have her to hold
Is all that I long for, before I am old
Heaven on earth, is what she is to me
One day she will see, when she decides to see
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Re: Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:48:49 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful poem, i really like the greek metaphors. |
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Re: Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 11:16:56 AM AEST
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Oh, I got more excited with each line as I
read on. This is an exquisite write of a deep
love for another. You write of her with ease, I
hope she decides to see in herself exactly
what you do. Beautiful and a joy to have
experienced.
~Jesse |
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Re: Beauty
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:26:03 PM AEST
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I hope you showed this to her it is beautiful.Nicely written...... May your love last forever
Michelle |
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Re: Beauty
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:07:23 AM AEST
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truly beautifully deeply full
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Beauty
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by karoody on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 07:18:08 AM AEST
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this is beauty....thanking you for showing this to us....wishing you beauty on the horizons of your future....
kara |
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