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Array ( [sid] => 144859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Twilights Hour [time] => 2008-09-01 15:17:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She may be the one on whispered wind
that floats gentle with the breeze.
Inside your open bedroom window and sit gentle near your side.
Once you smell the air tinted with hints of jasmine
you know she is around you then enticed with enchanted romance.

You feel her near your side and her breath upon your neck.
Her arms wrapping round your shoulders a hand rubbing your back.
Is she a dream or is she real, this is what you must discern
you find yourself aching for her in the twilights hour you yearn. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Twilights Hour

Contributed by shelby on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



She may be the one on whispered wind
that floats gentle with the breeze.
Inside your open bedroom window and sit gentle near your side.
Once you smell the air tinted with hints of jasmine
you know she is around you then enticed with enchanted romance.

You feel her near your side and her breath upon your neck.
Her arms wrapping round your shoulders a hand rubbing your back.
Is she a dream or is she real, this is what you must discern
you find yourself aching for her in the twilights hour you yearn.




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-09-01 15:17:47]
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Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:43:05 PM AEST
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A lovely write, Michelle...
The midnight hour does strange things, doesn't it?
Good to see you back..
Jenni


Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 08:17:07 PM AEST
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Yearning is where I live....
I totally relate to this..
Great write!
Steve


Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:03:20 AM AEST
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Oh Michelle what a softly enchanting write! Too
beautiful for words!


You've set the stage with captivating allure. I love
your word choices for this. They are so subtly
bewitching. This was gorgeous!

Lovely ~

~ Breezy



Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:17:03 AM AEST
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Shel this is short ...enticing the reader with every line. perfect, and just enough for the reader. love ya! Lane


Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 11:00:32 AM AEST
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"She" sounds wonderful. You've created a beautiful piece of imagery and romance here, well done.

~Jesse


Re: Twilights Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 08:43:26 PM AEST
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Utterly beatuiful....I know exactly what you are talking about...have spent many a twilight hour yearning for a loved one's touch. Once again beautifully written.

hugs
Rich




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