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Mr. Tree
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 12:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Have you met my friend,
Mr. Tree?
He's very good to me,
You see...
He has no mouth so,
He tells no lies
And he does not judge me,
For he has no eyes.
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-09-01 12:43:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:59:23 PM AEST (User
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Mr. Tree sounds like a good guy to me, lol.
This is simple and cute, but could have a
much deeper meaning and come from a
place of frustration as well. As though there
were someone else telling you lies and
judging you. I hope not! If so, stick to Mr.
Tree, he'll do right by you every time ;o).
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:34:08 PM AEST (User
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How something so cute can be so powerful
not to mention true, this is beautiful in such a
simple and delicate way, about one of earths
most beautiful inhabitants, a most lovely
write . . .
thank you also for your comment
and read . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:51:54 PM AEST (User
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that was a nice change ...lol
i liked it a lot... nice job,
wiz |
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 07:29:42 PM AEST (User
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Very short, indeed. But very powerful in the meaning. I love it! Too bad there aren't more people like your friend, Mr. Tree.
Very enjoyable.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:20:57 AM AEST (User
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this is excellent! very "bold and stands out to a reader. good work. Lane |
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Re: Mr. Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 10:13:10 AM AEST (User
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I have to admit i really like this, such a deep meaning in such few words now that is hard to do, i also found this soo very unique and i enjoyed it very much, the mighty tree is an ispiration to us all, and youve captured its solemn stance in a quirky but intellegint way, thanks for this!!!
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