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Array ( [sid] => 14485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~*LEO*~ [time] => 2003-03-18 12:05:00 [hometext] => ONE OF MY FRIENDS IS GONE NOW. I WROTE THIS 2 DAYS AFTER I FOUND OUT

~~R.I.P LEO~~
WE MISS YOU
WE LOVE YOU
WE ALWAYS WILL
BUT WE NOT REMEMBERING YOUR DEATH
WE'RE CELEBRATING YOUR LIFE [bodytext] => Why you?
Is it because niggaz hate?
Today, that's all they really do
But why?
You're really gone, Leo!
Why, of all people, you had to be the one to die?
You're too young!
Already everybody's missing you
Mike was bugging out
And so was Mitch
Hak looked like he wanted to fight
Leo listen, everybody was *****
I know you seen it
Just from you seeing that, you know how much you're missed
In school Friday, ain't nobody want to do nothing
Everywhere I turned, I saw somebody crying
I wanted to leave so bad, but I know you saw how Mike wouldn't let me
As I cried, Shavon was right there
Jamal was too
Do you see how much we all really miss you?
For comfort, I ran to Chris
He was real hurt
Man Leo, you're really gone, I can't take this
People, who knew you, that didn't cry
Really didn't have to
The pain was able to be seen right in their eyes
You didn't need to go
Everybody loves you
I don't see why they wouldn't have, you're Leo!
All of this is hard...
I don't see why anyone would want to hurt you
For life, our hearts are scarred
When I started writing, I didn't know where to start
Leo notice, in the 40 lines you've heard, not once did I refer to you using past tense
Why would I if the person I’m talking to is right here with me?
You'll always be in my heart [comments] => 7 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 38 [informant] => nay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
~*LEO*~

Contributed by nay on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



Why you?
Is it because niggaz hate?
Today, that's all they really do
But why?
You're really gone, Leo!
Why, of all people, you had to be the one to die?
You're too young!
Already everybody's missing you
Mike was bugging out
And so was Mitch
Hak looked like he wanted to fight
Leo listen, everybody was *****
I know you seen it
Just from you seeing that, you know how much you're missed
In school Friday, ain't nobody want to do nothing
Everywhere I turned, I saw somebody crying
I wanted to leave so bad, but I know you saw how Mike wouldn't let me
As I cried, Shavon was right there
Jamal was too
Do you see how much we all really miss you?
For comfort, I ran to Chris
He was real hurt
Man Leo, you're really gone, I can't take this
People, who knew you, that didn't cry
Really didn't have to
The pain was able to be seen right in their eyes
You didn't need to go
Everybody loves you
I don't see why they wouldn't have, you're Leo!
All of this is hard...
I don't see why anyone would want to hurt you
For life, our hearts are scarred
When I started writing, I didn't know where to start
Leo notice, in the 40 lines you've heard, not once did I refer to you using past tense
Why would I if the person I’m talking to is right here with me?
You'll always be in my heart




Copyright © nay ... [ 2003-03-18 12:05:00]
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Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:24:36 PM AEST
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oh this is just so sad...


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:25:09 PM AEST
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this was a good tribute, where there is love he will always be there

Sharon


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:45:34 PM AEST
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sorry your nigga had to go......i feel for cause i talked to you the day of..... what u wrote was beautiful though a great tribute to remeber him by


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:13:27 PM AEST
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oh dear, i'm soo sorry for your loss, beautiful tribute to a heart never to be forgotten, leo smiles upon you with this poem's loving beauty, huggs nessa


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 02:09:49 AM AEST
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Oh so sad. I'm sorry for your loss. Its hard to lose someone close to you. Keep him alive in your heart. Know you will see him again someday!!
Peace to your heart.
Michelle


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:29:28 AM AEST
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Death is so hard on those left behind. It will never go awway but the pain will ease in time and you will only have the good memories.

Be strong...

sleepless_siren


Re: ~*LEO*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetolbaby on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:59:20 PM AEST
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Nay, ya know it's vonnie here. i knew who leo was even though i was neva so close to him as you were, but i still feel hurt and i was crying too. this poem made me cry nay and we will always miss leo
RIP LEO (The good always seem to die young)




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