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Array ( [sid] => 144824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The trusted predator. [time] => 2008-08-31 06:25:48 [hometext] => You can't trust anyone. You never know who they really are. [bodytext] => "I love you so
now hold still
while I prove this all to you."




I believe you!
I BELIEVE YOU.
Let me loose, please let me move!



"Let you move?
Oh what on earth
that is just such an odd request."



Help me! Help me!
Please, somebody!
Hear my loudly beating chest!



"Now that we are all alone.
You are tied up and secure."



Oh if there is a god in heaven.
Please just help me
to endure.



"Oh how tender, ripe,
and young you are,
my taste buds are convulsing!"



Why me? I can't, I CAN'T!
For this shall be repulsing!



"I shall come much closer now,
and you shall stop this tantrum."



Im scared, IM SCARED.
SAVE ME SOMEONE!
Free me from this fantum!



"Now this is good,
now this is just exactly
as I hoped."



I want to die
just let me die
I simply cannot cope



"Your tears bring laughter
to my throat
in oh so joyful hurls!"



SOMEONE SAVE ME
SOMEONE COME!
IM JUST A LITTLE GIRL!



"Don't move a muscle
Hold tight now and tell me
how this feels"



I cry and close my eyes
and just pretend
its all not real.



[comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 71 [informant] => LauraMary [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )
The trusted predator.

Contributed by LauraMary on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 06:25:48 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets



"I love you so
now hold still
while I prove this all to you."




I believe you!
I BELIEVE YOU.
Let me loose, please let me move!



"Let you move?
Oh what on earth
that is just such an odd request."



Help me! Help me!
Please, somebody!
Hear my loudly beating chest!



"Now that we are all alone.
You are tied up and secure."



Oh if there is a god in heaven.
Please just help me
to endure.



"Oh how tender, ripe,
and young you are,
my taste buds are convulsing!"



Why me? I can't, I CAN'T!
For this shall be repulsing!



"I shall come much closer now,
and you shall stop this tantrum."



Im scared, IM SCARED.
SAVE ME SOMEONE!
Free me from this fantum!



"Now this is good,
now this is just exactly
as I hoped."



I want to die
just let me die
I simply cannot cope



"Your tears bring laughter
to my throat
in oh so joyful hurls!"



SOMEONE SAVE ME
SOMEONE COME!
IM JUST A LITTLE GIRL!



"Don't move a muscle
Hold tight now and tell me
how this feels"



I cry and close my eyes
and just pretend
its all not real.







Copyright © LauraMary ... [ 2008-08-31 06:25:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The trusted predator. (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 09:15:21 AM AEST
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that was awesome, i'm speechless (almost),

there was so much pain and sadness felt in this, it was actually a little disturbing to me... very emotive,

excellent write,

wiz


Re: The trusted predator. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:31:01 PM AEST
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very scary and disturbing. u've empathized very profoundly and skillfully. i hope this has not happened to u or anyone u mite know of. i bet this is how sum girls felt wen they were being abused. my heart goes to those victims. again, great write take care


Re: The trusted predator. (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:36:08 AM AEST
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ooh i really love the setup of this, and the whole rhyme scheme and everything... very cool, and disturbing. great poem, woman! :D


Re: The trusted predator. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 08:54:22 AM AEST
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You've allowed such fragile emotions,

to articulate with such raw honesty.

A self portrait of struggle at it's most

vulnerable time . . .



Ben




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