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Array ( [sid] => 144802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~ [time] => 2008-08-30 09:24:54 [hometext] => another elvish one [bodytext] => Sorrow is my fate
It envelops me more each day
I shut out everyone
I allow no one in

Tears fall like shattered glass
Cutting my heart to pieces as they drop
Releasing every fear
There is no hope left

I fall into the darkness
Shielded within myself
There will be no joy for me
I do not know happiness

Alone, I am always alone
I want another life
I want to be another person
But that cannot be

I watch others in their happiness
And weep
I know what it is to be alone
I am forsaken

Nyere nanya umbar
Caris vaiya nye ambe ilya aure
Etholtan ilquen
Lavnye ui umine

Nire lanta ve rucina calca
Rista orenya ana mitta ve limbalte
Lerya ilya caure
Tas na ui estel hyarya

Lantanye mir i more
Turma mi imne
Tas nira na ui alasse an ni
Umin ista valde

Er, nain illume er
Mernye enta coivie
Mernye na enta quen
Nan ta pol la na

Tirenye exe ulta valde
Ar nyenye
Istanye mana nas na er
Nanye hecile

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I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~

Contributed by muinanyere on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:24:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Sorrow is my fate
It envelops me more each day
I shut out everyone
I allow no one in

Tears fall like shattered glass
Cutting my heart to pieces as they drop
Releasing every fear
There is no hope left

I fall into the darkness
Shielded within myself
There will be no joy for me
I do not know happiness

Alone, I am always alone
I want another life
I want to be another person
But that cannot be

I watch others in their happiness
And weep
I know what it is to be alone
I am forsaken

Nyere nanya umbar
Caris vaiya nye ambe ilya aure
Etholtan ilquen
Lavnye ui umine

Nire lanta ve rucina calca
Rista orenya ana mitta ve limbalte
Lerya ilya caure
Tas na ui estel hyarya

Lantanye mir i more
Turma mi imne
Tas nira na ui alasse an ni
Umin ista valde

Er, nain illume er
Mernye enta coivie
Mernye na enta quen
Nan ta pol la na

Tirenye exe ulta valde
Ar nyenye
Istanye mana nas na er
Nanye hecile

Copyright © muinanyere ... [ 2008-08-30 09:24:54]
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Re: I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~ (User Rating: 1 )
by polaris773 on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:40:52 AM AEST
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totally sad but your writing has a lot of weight in it.

Re: I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written, tho so sad....
Jenni

Re: I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~ (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:49:12 AM AEST
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This broke my heart. A truly beautiful write, you captured incredibly deep emotions with a few words...
Very well done, I can't wait to read some more of your poems :)

Re: I Am Forsaken ~Nanye Hecile~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LauraMary on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 11:21:14 AM AEST
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This is sad.
Though I can relate to how you feel, and I'm sure others can too.
Well done.

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