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Purrs purrs purrs purrs purrs
Her fur was burnt off
She wants revenge,
She wants your blood

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

The frail pale woman calls from the tub
Drop drop drop drop drop
Her God didn't pull her up
She wants revenge
She wants your blood

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
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The Haunted House

Contributed by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The bloody feline stalks forward
Purrs purrs purrs purrs purrs
Her fur was burnt off
She wants revenge,
She wants your blood

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

The frail pale woman calls from the tub
Drop drop drop drop drop
Her God didn't pull her up
She wants revenge
She wants your blood

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!

These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house

Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!

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Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:01:25 AM AEST
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The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house . . .

The above verse did it for me,

most chilling in it's relentless

intrusion on one's reality. A

convincing testament to an

invading entity that's is half

nightmare and half day dream.

very involving to the reader . . .

Ben . . .

Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:43:01 PM AEST
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very eerie, this is a great write, sorry you had such a creepy nightmare

Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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nicely done,

i meant have a nightmare tonight now...

wiz

Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:16:12 AM AEST
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Damn! Almost gave me a daymare. (Ha Ha)

Heck of a dream here.

Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 06:28:12 AM AEST
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This is a very interesting coincidence I had a nightmare just moments ago and now I am commenting on it.

This is performance art, not poetry.

SCM

Re: The Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 06:49:43 AM AEST
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creepy :O ...it just pulls one along...

hugs n' love nessa

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