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As you rush out from my life
This wasted body aches all day
Remembering your gentle touch

Now that my body divides
Soul against meat and blood
Hatred fills my essence
But my hands still shake with lust

This sun covered in hazy pictures
A landscape full of spikes
My blood covers your features
And still you sleep sound all night

These colors of loyalty and trust
Slowly fade away in time
Yet your audience still cheers
And your frame keeps its charm

Feathers fly around in this room
Where salt and sugar combines
Stains left scattered on the floor
Will not be cleansed until you rot

So beautiful and fair
You walk down a path of blood
With carcasses left bloating in the sun
Eyes still wet, hearts torn apart

Care to join me in this game
In which I show my demise
A story of you and me
And of an unfulfilled desire
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 6 [informant] => net [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Blood

Contributed by net on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Hope has just flown away
As you rush out from my life
This wasted body aches all day
Remembering your gentle touch

Now that my body divides
Soul against meat and blood
Hatred fills my essence
But my hands still shake with lust

This sun covered in hazy pictures
A landscape full of spikes
My blood covers your features
And still you sleep sound all night

These colors of loyalty and trust
Slowly fade away in time
Yet your audience still cheers
And your frame keeps its charm

Feathers fly around in this room
Where salt and sugar combines
Stains left scattered on the floor
Will not be cleansed until you rot

So beautiful and fair
You walk down a path of blood
With carcasses left bloating in the sun
Eyes still wet, hearts torn apart

Care to join me in this game
In which I show my demise
A story of you and me
And of an unfulfilled desire




Copyright © net ... [ 2008-08-28 09:27:46]
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Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:11:15 PM AEST
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great post,

nicely done,

wiz


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:26:03 PM AEST
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real good


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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truly a good poem


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 11:07:48 PM AEST
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Yes there is always pain involved with love, but it is part of it all...
Good Poem..
Keep it up!


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by LauraMary on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:57:48 AM AEST
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Wow.
Well done.


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:45:59 AM AEST
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"Now that my body divides
Soul against meat and blood
Hatred fills my essence
But my hands still shake with lust"
My favorite part.
You really are fantastic!


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by net on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:18:53 PM AEST
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it's been hard for me to return to this site and read these works again, for they remind me of a difficult time yet to be overcome. but i have to say your comments are one of the reasons i still manage to survive as i am, as a depressed soul. for pain is just unbearable, without some sympathy from others. thank you...




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