Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 21:34:57 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 144728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant u see?? [time] => 2008-08-26 02:16:59 [hometext] => Dedicated To: Gerald Allen Gilbert (my latest ex) [bodytext] => cant u see??
this is how its meant to be
friends is all that we can be..
we were once lovers,
who trusted each other,
but u had a doubt,
and no longer trusted me,
u believe wat ppl tell u,
and dnt even take the time
to listen to me...
cnt u see??
that we just cnt be..
no longer lovers,
and maybe not friends...
we moved to fast,
our love didnt last..
weve grown apart,
we have no future together..
we go our separate ways,
we cnt look each other in the face..
so many lies,
to much pain...
cnt u see?
we just cnt be... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 52 [informant] => PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

cant u see??

Contributed by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 02:16:59 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

cant u see??
this is how its meant to be
friends is all that we can be..
we were once lovers,
who trusted each other,
but u had a doubt,
and no longer trusted me,
u believe wat ppl tell u,
and dnt even take the time
to listen to me...
cnt u see??
that we just cnt be..
no longer lovers,
and maybe not friends...
we moved to fast,
our love didnt last..
weve grown apart,
we have no future together..
we go our separate ways,
we cnt look each other in the face..
so many lies,
to much pain...
cnt u see?
we just cnt be...

Copyright © PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer ... [ 2008-08-26 02:16:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: cant u see?? (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 05:09:30 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

If this is indeed a message to a young man, it will be confusing. Its a nice way of putting how you feel, but you are starting with being friends and ending with you can't be.
As a former young man, trust me, it will be confusing...
Very choppy, but the emotion is there. Bridle it and your message will clear...
Good job!

Re: cant u see?? (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 06:36:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i feel this in my heart. the last 4 lines sum it all up and made me just feel so sad. this piece is very easy to relate to. i think everyone has had to deal with saying goodbye to someone even when they dont' want to and its so hard, but theres just no way they can say hello again because of something that was said or done.

-kara

Re: cant u see?? (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 01:31:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

so full of sadness and longing, nicely done,

wiz

Re: cant u see?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 11:01:55 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I just cnt n dnt git it. Wut iz dis about? Who iz dis 4? Do u akuly believe dis iz poe it tree? Dis haz 2 b de poem dat 8 poetry.
cnt u c?

this is one of the most ridiculous things I have ever seen posted on this site only rivaled by the other poem of yours I commented on. I'm sorry. I got a little ahead of myself. This is not poetry, nor was the other post. Learn the English language toss your cell phone in the river it is frying your brain.

Learn to spell, comprehend English, quit bastardizing poetry and perhaps spend more time in the books and less on your looks. Cuz they ain't no such thing as half way crooks.

Dung!

SCM

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com