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Array ( [sid] => 144706 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My try--cauchy3 [time] => 2008-08-25 01:05:17 [hometext] => My try [bodytext] => My try…..
Brushed up targets does my tricks.
Touch the winds are gathered whiz.
Double talks have got on hand.
Peaces and wars have cut in hard.

Peaces and wars are down on sizes.
Hammer tongs are half to wars.
High and mighty goes in times.
Hot in numbers got all hang.

Oils and waters get my tries.
Black as boxes will hide your lights.
China boxes have nothing ices.
Raise the china boxes as sins.

Hard as put are painful days.
All distorted are china bags.
Does a bit has gods are done.
Fishes in cans are men in stones.

Does my bit is china wings.
All distorted are china trips.
Eat to out of hands as mot.
Dead as nails of doors are gods.

All at seas are china pass.
Live in back of doors are man.
Custer last to stand is wars.
Fall on stones our men are mad.

Taiwan gets his words in edges.
China gets the legs up spheres.
China talks have gees and winds.
Taiwan gets around and wins.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------

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My try--cauchy3

Contributed by cauchy3 on Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 01:05:17 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

My try…..
Brushed up targets does my tricks.
Touch the winds are gathered whiz.
Double talks have got on hand.
Peaces and wars have cut in hard.

Peaces and wars are down on sizes.
Hammer tongs are half to wars.
High and mighty goes in times.
Hot in numbers got all hang.

Oils and waters get my tries.
Black as boxes will hide your lights.
China boxes have nothing ices.
Raise the china boxes as sins.

Hard as put are painful days.
All distorted are china bags.
Does a bit has gods are done.
Fishes in cans are men in stones.

Does my bit is china wings.
All distorted are china trips.
Eat to out of hands as mot.
Dead as nails of doors are gods.

All at seas are china pass.
Live in back of doors are man.
Custer last to stand is wars.
Fall on stones our men are mad.

Taiwan gets his words in edges.
China gets the legs up spheres.
China talks have gees and winds.
Taiwan gets around and wins.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------

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Re: My try--cauchy3 (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 08:52:27 AM AEST
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despite the obvious trouble that this piece faces with either translation, or lack of mastery of the language, this was a great piece, i enjoyed it...

wiz

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