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Lightening his step as he takes vengeance
Against those that have wronged him
As well as rest of this pathetic excuse of the human condition

Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by his side
All the while his prey sleep unknowing

While the walls watch silently
Icy fingers claw up a slumbering spine
Nightmares run the mind’s highway like blood thirsty vigilantes
Looking for their next unsuspecting victim

Standing next to dreaming eyes
With their forked tongues demons kiss
The beads of sweat that pour from flushed skin
As peaceful dreams turn dark and demented

2008
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He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him

Contributed by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 11:04:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Winged devils carry his anger
Lightening his step as he takes vengeance
Against those that have wronged him
As well as rest of this pathetic excuse of the human condition

Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by his side
All the while his prey sleep unknowing

While the walls watch silently
Icy fingers claw up a slumbering spine
Nightmares run the mind’s highway like blood thirsty vigilantes
Looking for their next unsuspecting victim

Standing next to dreaming eyes
With their forked tongues demons kiss
The beads of sweat that pour from flushed skin
As peaceful dreams turn dark and demented

2008

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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 10:00:57 AM AEST
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woo-hoo! this is great! I love this stuff...good work my friend. Lane

Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 05:58:18 AM AEST
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Rich,

Brilliant piece. This is great.

Deadwriter

Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 02:24:44 PM AEST
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Rich,
dark and well written you gave me shiverssssssss

hug
Michelle

Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 02:20:24 PM AEST
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man thats awsome i like dat stuff
good write
~maggot~

Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:10:16 AM AEST
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oh my gosh. this is so cool! i particularly love the last stanza, but this whole poem has just such an eerie mood to it... i love it! great write!

Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st March 2019 @ 10:15:58 AM AEST
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When I saw the title, I thought, oh maybe a poem about the movie Tombstone. But noooo. Just kidding. Still like it. Definitely spooky and dark.

Very nice!

Thanks,

Tim

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