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Array ( [sid] => 144631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reflection [time] => 2008-08-19 11:21:52 [hometext] => a girl that thought she was ugly [bodytext] => I stood Her before the mirror..
and asked what do you see...

Do You see the Ocean green
in Your eyes..the clarity..
do You see the smile..
wanting to break from your lips..
do You see the fine lines..so distinct.

Do you imagine a flower...right about here..
or a ribbon..
gracing the flow of Your hair..
and do You see hearts melting..
if You shed a tear.

Do You see kindness and forgiveness..
all wrapped up and waiting..
Do You see past the mirror?...

A tear launched from Her eye..
my god Lane what are you looking at...

Your Reflection.....Vincent

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Reflection

Contributed by crow on Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 11:21:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I stood Her before the mirror..
and asked what do you see...

Do You see the Ocean green
in Your eyes..the clarity..
do You see the smile..
wanting to break from your lips..
do You see the fine lines..so distinct.

Do you imagine a flower...right about here..
or a ribbon..
gracing the flow of Your hair..
and do You see hearts melting..
if You shed a tear.

Do You see kindness and forgiveness..
all wrapped up and waiting..
Do You see past the mirror?...

A tear launched from Her eye..
my god Lane what are you looking at...

Your Reflection.....Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2008-08-19 11:21:52]
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Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
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A very gallant and sweet gesture... well written...
Jenni

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 12:38:58 PM AEST
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good GOD! That was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read! Lane you
astound me, man! You always kind of whisper your thoughts to the wind
and allow the breeze to carry them to hearts, speaking in soft tones, but this
one is not a whisper. It's an out loud confirmation! And it is damn captivating.

LOVE THIS!! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!
I am floored! Truly. A sight to behold ~

*roses at your feet*

~ Breezy

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Seeker18 on Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 01:12:44 PM AEST
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Truly, lovly...

I almost wish there was more to it.

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:00:46 AM AEST
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Well spoken! I so hope you got through!

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:51:26 AM AEST
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through the eye of the beholder...lovely my friend

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:49:49 PM AEST
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Utterly beautiful man. You did an amazing job. I am trying to get my wife to see the herself the way that I do....And this is pretty close to the conversation that she and I usually have. Lovely.

Rich

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 08:23:22 PM AEST
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How very very impressive! I applaud thee. You or the person you are writing about is an absolutely awesome friend. Beautiful poem about a beautiful friendship.

Thank you,

Tim

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:19:09 AM AEST
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this is just, amazing.
absolutely amazing.
strong, and beautiful...
well, color me impressed! :D

--Katie

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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awwww sooo sweet!! you are quite the knight in shining armour my friend, always there when someone needs you, always a gentle light in the darkness,

hugs n' love nessa

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