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Haunted
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~~*~~
Haunted
Here’s a word, which I really don’t use
It’s not one that I would often choose
But I truly felt, that I was somewhat haunted
Yet my gaze at you left me undaunted
Now this had really caught me off-guard
And it’s of myself that I questioned hard
As you passed by, your hand did brush
And deep inside I felt this rush
But it’s when our eyes had chance to meet
I became uncomfortable within my seat
It was not love, and it was not lust
Yet here I felt this unknown must
And when I couldn’t, take it anymore
I decided that I should hit the door
So I said my goodbyes as I usually do
Then took my one last look at you
For knowing full well right as of then
That I might not ever, see you again
But this is how it had to be
I don’t quite know, what came over me
~~*~~
2008-07-17
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ZiggyB
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Re: Haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:12:56 PM AEST (User
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This is really interesting. I love how clearly you expressed an unclear emotion. I could perfectly picture it and it left me feeling as though I had the emotion myself. Terrific.
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Re: Haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 12:32:10 AM AEST (User
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Great description of a confused state of mind..Well done...
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Re: Haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by eternalsunshine on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 01:11:50 PM AEST (User
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great write,
i feel your pain and the haunt of a missed connection... |
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Re: Haunted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 10:54:23 AM AEST (User
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Good grief!!! This is SOOOOOO ambiguous! And I LOVE that it is! Your emotion
was written with a clarity, though you, yourself do not even know what you were
suffering from. That is wonderfully and cleverly written! I was caught slightly
off guard and even made feel somewhat uncomfortable in my own skin, as
if I was feeling that confusion myself. Well done poet!! Very well done!
~ Breezy
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