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So Life Goes On
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 08:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ignored, deadly quiet, with no reply
Is there something now wrong with I
Night off, so I'm at home, and she goes out
Had a shower, its not the smell, now I have my doubts
Gets up, she goes to work, no good morning....no goodbye
And so is this why? home is as lonely, as the empty sky
She gets home, I'm off to work, my goodbyes met with silence
What goes on, I wonder why, I need a degree in emotional science
Did I do you wrong, what have I done, nothing said, just none
You wont talk, so nothing can be fixed, and I am just one
It will end, I guess real soon, and you'll have flown
No more here, just me again, down and alone
But life goes on, or so they say
To yet another long lonely day.
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Mick_Puttock
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2008-08-14 20:28:28]
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:28:21 PM AEST
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Looks like you have to start studying for that degree again, my friend... Good to see you with the pen again...
((((((((hugs))))))))
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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| silence is hard to deal with, sooner or later things boil. have a great day. good write. Lane |
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 02:01:38 AM AEST
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| Welcome back Mick, nice to see you posting again. |
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 11:14:03 AM AEST
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wow this is very heartfelt for something you just wrote.. its very well done and intense and im sure alot of people can relate.. Lovely job.. glad to see you writing again
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 05:09:11 PM AEST
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Well, my dear, dear, Webmaster,
It might be silent there but your pen is making mucho noise.
I'm alone but not lonly. Because when I found this site I found a purpose much greater than mine.
Now you know how we feel when we don't hear from you.
You still got all of us and we may be cantanerous at times but I think we all luv you.
If I hadn't found this spot my life would be very lonely too.
You've given my heart a home.
You give me a reason to keep on keepin on.
I'm so gratefull to be here and all that you do for us all.
Big huggs, smiles, much luv,
emy |
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Re: So Life Goes On
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:32:50 AM AEST
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Aah.. weldone.. Dear Sir, I have studied this "degree in emotional science" for few years...when my parents lived with us before they left to heaven..
God bless love and happiness :-)venkat
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