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The Crush
Contributed by
agentprimus
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Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 08:03:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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THE CRUSH
Curves and curves and hills of delight, skin so smooth a complexion so right
Eyes so deep, so dark, yet bright, like big swirling black holes where none can escape
A smile so friendly, so honest, so free, a smile so deadly it’s dangerous to see
I am ripped, I am torn, with these feelings of longing and lorn
Your walk hypnotizes me, your talk seduces me, your way intoxicates me
When I see you I can see heaven and I am in hell
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2008-08-14 08:03:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Crush
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:47:50 AM AEST (User
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A thorough description of what it means to have a crush. I like the rhyme and flow, and the honesty of it. I hope you get your girl (assuming it's about a girl ;o)).
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