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Array ( [sid] => 144534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dancing Through The Sky [time] => 2008-08-13 12:25:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i walk with amazement
as my toes touch the ground
penetrating all the love
from this wonderful earth
called life,

as i look up the sky
i see beauty all around,
my feet start to shiver
as i'm lifted slowly up
leaving all behind,

as i fly through the sky
the sun shines bright,
as its rays slowly caress
whispering secrets
of love,
you once forgotten

my tears fall like rain
remembering the moment you left ,
washing the summer away,
the leafs are turning dead
as my love slowly vanishes
into the winter cold
it will fade,

but i will survive these cold nights ahead
knowing my love for you
will stay to last,
need nothing more
just a glimpse of your eyes
once more,
and memories for life,

i will forever dance
with the sun through the sky,
in joy of having you once in my life
i will cherish it
till the end of time... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 24 [informant] => eternalsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Dancing Through The Sky

Contributed by eternalsunshine on Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

i walk with amazement
as my toes touch the ground
penetrating all the love
from this wonderful earth
called life,

as i look up the sky
i see beauty all around,
my feet start to shiver
as i'm lifted slowly up
leaving all behind,

as i fly through the sky
the sun shines bright,
as its rays slowly caress
whispering secrets
of love,
you once forgotten

my tears fall like rain
remembering the moment you left ,
washing the summer away,
the leafs are turning dead
as my love slowly vanishes
into the winter cold
it will fade,

but i will survive these cold nights ahead
knowing my love for you
will stay to last,
need nothing more
just a glimpse of your eyes
once more,
and memories for life,

i will forever dance
with the sun through the sky,
in joy of having you once in my life
i will cherish it
till the end of time...

Copyright © eternalsunshine ... [ 2008-08-13 12:25:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:37:28 PM AEST
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very sweet and beautifully written.

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:46:34 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, my friend..I believe it's better to have loved and lost then to have never known love at all.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 01:20:17 AM AEST
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aww this is very sweet and heartfelt.. lovely job here

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 12:16:37 PM AEST
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Such a wonderful and refreshing outlook with a hint of pain. Beautifully expressed.

~Jesse

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 01:13:33 PM AEST
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this is madd good, while reading it i could visual your words in my mind, keep up the write

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:03:21 PM AEST
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Sounds like a strong love to me.

Excellent write

~Stephan

Re: Dancing Through The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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memories of love are the very best..excellent write. Lane

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