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~Incomplete~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 02:51:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



~~^~~

Incomplete
Like the night skies without the stars

Empty
Like a highway without any cars

Cold and dark
Like a mansion without love and light

Desolate
Like the country roads at midnight.

Barren
Like the sands of the desert when it’s hot..

Deserted
Like the little island that time forgot.

*
*
*

This is how I felt tonight
When I didn’t see you on the site.

~~^~~




Copyright © Jenni_K ... [ 2008-08-09 14:51:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 03:33:17 PM AEST
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Awe, Jenni. This is so good. Go to sleep and maybe you'll meet in your dreams...


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:14:37 AM AEST
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wow this is very errily deep.. I love this poem alot.. its beautiful..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 04:25:12 AM AEST
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i can relate to this profound but sad poem(sigh). nice structure and imagery as well. you're a skilled poet...Hope that person will be there next time/all the time. take care
-K.Z.


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 12:11:47 PM AEST
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The depth of honesty is beauitful,no matter the feelings that inspire.
You have penned well,your heart.
Much love!


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 05:47:36 PM AEST
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Dear sister, I am happy can share your mood always, great job!


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 01:07:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully deep and sad, Jenni.
.................Mike


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 11:33:58 PM AEST
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Jenni,

This is bittersweet...hope all is well.

Beautiful writing as always.

~Stephan


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:29:01 PM AEST
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aww this is sweet
enjoyed it much

lots of love...:)


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:42:35 AM AEST
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Oh Jenni hun. Sue hugs Jen so tight. I feel your sadness. Can you imagine the night skies without any stars, or a world without love or light, Yekes!
I'm so sorry you're feeling like this dear friend. I wished I could make it all better for you sweetheart. When you become so involved with someone, it's like they become the air you need to breathe. Ah yes, I know that feeling. Chin up babe.
A sad and heart tugging write. Wishing you a rainbow of happiness to warm your heart my dear friend. I have missed you so much. Take care
love n hugs,
Sue M


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:19:34 AM AEST
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Dear Jenni it's wonderfully written ...I hope you are complete now.

God bless you my good friend.
FRANCO.


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:23:02 AM AEST
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With all of these friends around it is hard to think you would ever be incomplete. Great write Jenni.

Deadwriter


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 08:06:18 PM AEST
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jenni, jenni - I wouldn't be waiting for anybody on this site or any other to complete you, but I do know the feeling - and its a real kick in the guts. You captured the feeling very well.

Spike


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 02:07:11 PM AEST
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You took the words right out of my mouth...but you arranged them so much better than me. I can so relate to this poem. I can really feel the emotion. Very nicely done.

Thank you,

Tim


Re: ~Incomplete~ (User Rating: 1 )
by sirenofthenorth on Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 07:01:13 AM AEST
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Jenni,
That was...amazing, so full of emotion. Nice Job.




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