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Array ( [sid] => 144423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am [time] => 2008-08-07 10:54:28 [hometext] => instead of a description, I made this up at the top of my head and used this for the bio of my livejournal [bodytext] => I am the dark on the lightest day
I am the star on the darkest night
I am the moon reflecting sun's last ray
I am the tears after every fight

I am the pain in the child's eye
I am the dream that passed you by
I am the demon in the sky
I am the very last tear you cry

I am the shadow that forever creeps
I am the eyes that watch you sleep
I am the miracle you'll never see
I am me
I am me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 43 [informant] => KismetsPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I Am

Contributed by KismetsPoet on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am the dark on the lightest day
I am the star on the darkest night
I am the moon reflecting sun's last ray
I am the tears after every fight

I am the pain in the child's eye
I am the dream that passed you by
I am the demon in the sky
I am the very last tear you cry

I am the shadow that forever creeps
I am the eyes that watch you sleep
I am the miracle you'll never see
I am me
I am me

Copyright © KismetsPoet ... [ 2008-08-07 10:54:28]
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Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this poem, throughout you really give an epic sense of self, and your descriiptions were amazing " i am the demon in the sky" that really freaked me out. it gave such a sense to the bad side of self, overall each verse is intruiging and expressive and overflowing with passion, keep on writing you've got some great talent!!!

Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST
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If that's off the top of your head, I wonder what you could do with a little effort. It is a very, very good poem. I thought it was great.

~Me~

Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:58:26 AM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!
the repetition of "i am me" really makes the poem for me,
though the entire thing is incredible.
powerful, sort of mysterious too?
overall, a great poem!

--Katie

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