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Array ( [sid] => 144406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Hour [time] => 2008-08-06 10:54:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => For every day there is at least one hour
During which you don’t feel sour
You feel as if the world is good
Everything seems as it should

But alas,
These hours pass
And everything goes to hell
As you know well

But I would give all these hours
Just to see you when you’re sour
To be able to ease your mind
Would be, almighty fine

But there’s no telling what I’d give
To be with you as you live
And knowing this probably won’t come true
Is enough to turn this man blue
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ryanadams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 41 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

One Hour

Contributed by ryanadams on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 10:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

For every day there is at least one hour
During which you don’t feel sour
You feel as if the world is good
Everything seems as it should

But alas,
These hours pass
And everything goes to hell
As you know well

But I would give all these hours
Just to see you when you’re sour
To be able to ease your mind
Would be, almighty fine

But there’s no telling what I’d give
To be with you as you live
And knowing this probably won’t come true
Is enough to turn this man blue

Copyright Â© ryanadams ... [ 2008-08-06 10:54:47]
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Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by ryanadams on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 09:05:21 AM AEST
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I wrote this poem about a girl i met while on vacation in panama city florida. Bieng around her made me feel great, but I live 7 hours away, so it could never be.

Re: One Hour (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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Aw. This was good. I liked it.

Sorry for the other post.
I love life and I thought bitter things. well
anyway. Keep writing.

^_^

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