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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Message For Her
[time] => 2008-08-06 10:35:58
[hometext] => help me out. should i send this to her?
[bodytext] => Bella. Enchanting eyes captivating my mind making it hard to leave you behind until i stop breathing until i feel no more you ARE my heart my one amore. there is a good chance that this message could bring anything we ever had to an end. this may be embarrassing for me but i want you to see exactly what you mean to me these are the thoughts, in which i had no one to tell. the rhymes may be corny but they get the point across just as well. im only hurting myself so this may be the last time i try its not like i'm trying to make you my wife i only want a friend who can be there for me returning the favor in times when i need various thoughts overflowing the page. if i don't get them out they will turn into rage. all that is poured seems thick and past tense. admittedly at times i may not make sense. but i must express how i felt from the start, sappy, but here these words are my heart so onto paper it bleeds. it shows me my past my path and my dreams. it started with a glance from across a crowded room the dancers were the attraction but the best light was on you so naturally, i'm hooked you have all my attention i must meet her outside this domain of pretensions months go by... nothing a word here or there like "hi, how are you" or "may i please have a beer" one night we were smoking after you got off of work my courage appeared along with a smirk i'm thinking i'm slick with a trick up my sleeve maybe i'll kiss her as she tries to leave but then i was stunned... October 6th 2007 40 minutes past 3 awake in the A.M. ...you kissed me stopped me dead now the meaning of love has changed in my head you've shaken my core blurred my vision captured my breath so i've made you my mission all in a moment for one single kiss seemed like eternity in a moment of bliss one single moment i'm entirely changed i will drop my whole world at the sound of your name no matter the distance our wavelength remains though in separate beds our dreams are the same i will always want everything you're not incapable of giving it i just beleive you see me unfit forgive me for assuming but you don't know how grueling its been to have such chemistry and still you can't take me seriously with a connection so rare something so few people share its a crime not to see where these feelings could lead if you were to ask me its because of my youth if so, please have the courage to tell me the truth but always know this eternally here for you when ever you need you know what to do. just call on me to tell me your beliefs tell me your dreams, tell me your wants, and tell me your needs. which i will be a man and always defend i will always listen, never pass judgment, comprehend and understand [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 43 [informant] => redsleeve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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