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Array ( [sid] => 144401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Monsters [time] => 2008-08-06 04:15:12 [hometext] => Fighting my inner demons [bodytext] =>

The monsters are running loose again
Now the wall has been knocked down
I can't escape the sadness
In memories I slowly drown

I fight the monsters every day
Sometimes I even win
But memories are flooding in now
Slowly filling within

I clutch at the sides of emptiness
Trying to stay afloat
But the sadness gets higher and higher
And someone has stolen the rope

I try so hard each and every day
I scream till my throat is raw
But I'm not sure how to go on
Will the monsters win this war


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Monsters

Contributed by dawny on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 04:15:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry





The monsters are running loose again
Now the wall has been knocked down
I can't escape the sadness
In memories I slowly drown

I fight the monsters every day
Sometimes I even win
But memories are flooding in now
Slowly filling within

I clutch at the sides of emptiness
Trying to stay afloat
But the sadness gets higher and higher
And someone has stolen the rope

I try so hard each and every day
I scream till my throat is raw
But I'm not sure how to go on
Will the monsters win this war






Copyright © dawny ... [ 2008-08-06 04:15:12]
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Re: Monsters (User Rating: 1 )
by hannahbanana on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 08:08:30 AM AEST
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can totally relate..great poem..hope you fight those demons and win..much love


Re: Monsters (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 26th November 2008 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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Hi Dawny!!

Sorry, only just looked on here after probably a year lol.
Good poem mate, as always, good to get those emotions down on paper.

Hope you are all well, my msn addresses got wiped from a scam email. I'll try to send you my poem that got modded, I warn you though, it's long!
:-))

Ali xxx




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