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[aid] => mick
[title] => Belle of the Ocean Burning Thus with Fire
[time] => 2008-08-04 11:06:57
[hometext] => I did not expect to write a poem of such a passionate and lovemaking nature thus so soon. It is difficult to keep anew and to make it something beautiful as well. This one shall probably be rewritten someday, but…
[bodytext] => Anyways, it is full of Hawaiian folklore so I figure I shall help you with some hints: Kanaloa- god of the ocean / Kane - the creator / Pele - Goddess of the Volcano / Lie - goddess of the mountains / Ouli - god who could kill people if prayed to / the Green Lady - No one walks through the grass or the forests of Hawaii without a source of light. Story has it that if you do, a lady in a white dress will appear and scare you. Another story says that if you see her she will kill you. This will happen in any large green plant area, such as a park or forest and only at night. Personally I think this one is not quite that good. It has potential -but not nearly as well exicuted as Evermore As One or Wrapped About In You but i just wrote it today and will refine it in the future with a fresh mindset. ok... i have edited this ten times since posted... thats how unfinished i feel it is.... Belle of the Ocean Burning Thus with Fire The ocean rips its tide about you Belle upon the wave Glides you on the swell Slipping in the curl Hand within the water Kanaloa in a passion Beguiled within your charms Thrust forth his mighty splendor To trap and keep you there But through his arms your slipping My maiden of the sea My maiden oh so fair. I see you dressed in satin Sea green drops of blue The water swells in passion Kissing about you Wraps you at the waist Naked in the tide Your hair like fire cast about Golden sun-drops chased Your eyes draw me within their currents Pulls me to your arms Holds my eyes to linger While held in your embrace. The golden veil wisps freely Woven willing by the sun Me gazing down in wonder Lifting up your face Lost... Within your pools Ouli has slain my heart Deep within the moment Your breath comes one with mine Lips upon yours parted Dripping thus with passion Drowning out my soul Bathing it in waters My baby makes it whole Tasting at the droplets Salty on your cheek And see that Kane has cast you A goddess makes me weep. Oh, that Goddess Lie has formed you Thus, helping Kane in curves well swept Casting thus a golden goddess also My baby full of Pele's fire Falling in my arms To bathe... And kiss, and bless Drowning in desire Naked in a sea green dress I'll hold you ever safely Well above the mire Wet caress within my arms Yet, filling ever wanton Desire in my heart While through the fields we wander The Green Lady held at bay The brightness of the your heart The sunshine in your hair Dims her dress of white Leaves her in her place. Oh, poor Kanaloa Her love you shall not know And Hinakuluiau, her mother, Rains tears upon the scene But shall not be between us Never between us shall she go This girl, this goddess thus is mine Wrapped within my heart Wrapped within this moment Wrapped within her there Knowing we need not Knowing she is mine My heart within her hands Held there within mine. Oh... Need I not a chart nor compass To map hands upon your shores To feel, to touch… To wander... Paths of golden sands Smooth and languid laying Trapped within your glass Warmth upon you burning Pulsing ‘neath my hands Paint you with my tongue A brush gentle as it strokes The cleft upon your neck The shadows drip with hues In tan and reddish blush Painting ever slowly Tasting all of you. Oh, sweet sultry baby girl My hands map you oh so well Sliding down the furrow Oh to feel you rise With waves that surge and swell Dripping thus with passion Leaving you so wet Pounding thus your heart Pounding ever closer Waves foaming all about So sweet your breath in rasps Sultry, silken shouts My name within this moment My lips within you pause To kiss upon the oceans Swelling forth from you Washing with its blessing My heart now within you. Down upon the beach The stars to bless us so Laying down upon you Burning me with fire Down upon your warmth Burning ever deeper Burning within you Of fires born within Feeling with the thrust The waves within you pounding Pounding ever pounding Foaming in their guise Longing ever longing Lost... Within your eyes. Oh, to feel you tremble Pele’s fires within you burn Burning in a fever Quakes about me fair Quaking in your splendor Erupting in your fire Giving forth your passion Flows in rivers burning Dripping thus with love Pulling back your hair Thrusting forth in passion My heart does fill you so Making you thus quiver Shaking thus with me Dying in the embers Resting on the shores Oh to kiss you boldly And to hold you there Dying in the embers Resting on the shores. --Kevin M. Wheeler-- [comments] => 2 [counter] => 334 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wheels [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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