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Array ( [sid] => 144348 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => STRONG WILLED [time] => 2008-08-03 13:18:23 [hometext] => A repost/ they just took my brother to the hospital. He's been struggling just to stay here. I luv him so I just let go and left him in God's capable luv. [bodytext] => STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2


Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.


He's strong willed, my
bro
Lives for others you know?
he's been thru fire, much
rain
His brethe is weak, so weak.
Lives in so very much, pain.

Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.


He's sick again, lungs still
It pains us to see him this way.
Don't wonna see him leave this hill.
Help him, I tottally pray.

Humbly we put in your hands, Luv
"Cause doctta Jesus in charge, now
So if you take him we'll cry
But we'll see him by-n-by.

Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.



Copyright © emystar .... [ 2007-08-06 13:29:03 ]
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STRONG WILLED

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 01:18:23 PM in AEST
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STRONG WILLED. ENTRY 2


Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.


He's strong willed, my
bro
Lives for others you know?
he's been thru fire, much
rain
His brethe is weak, so weak.
Lives in so very much, pain.

Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.


He's sick again, lungs still
It pains us to see him this way.
Don't wonna see him leave this hill.
Help him, I tottally pray.

Humbly we put in your hands, Luv
"Cause doctta Jesus in charge, now
So if you take him we'll cry
But we'll see him by-n-by.

Our strong wills keep us here
Never knowing, only blind faith.
The seeds of our fore father gone
Heaven on Earth, a taste.



Copyright © emystar .... [ 2007-08-06 13:29:03 ]
(Date/Time posted on this site.)




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2008-08-03 13:18:23]
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Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:56:47 PM AEST
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aww a lovely write from ya emy star!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 07:43:40 PM AEST
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Emy this is so sad, my thoughts are with you and I admire you for your faith.

Take care,

Dom


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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Emy I wish the best for your brother, terrific write. and tribute to him.. peace my friend. Lane


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 10:12:04 AM AEST
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Your faith is so strong Em one of many reason I admire and love you so.

This is a beautiful tribute to your brother.
I wish you all peace and the very best.

So sorry to hear this news.

hugs
Michelle


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 10:54:53 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...I will add him to my prayers

Hugs
Shari


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 12:43:08 PM AEST
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Oh Em,
I am terribly sorry to hear this. I know that he is in good hands and will be looked after.
Keep the faith, grrlfriend...
I will keep the family in my prayers.
Hugs and love
Jenni


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 02:39:46 AM AEST
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Excellent tribute
Your goodness shines through for all to see
sorry to hear about your brother


Re: STRONG WILLED (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 03:01:33 PM AEST
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((((emystar)))) sorry for your pain emy . . .


Ben




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