Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:06:07 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 144336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dirty Pie [time] => 2008-08-03 02:44:30 [hometext] => this is my first poem in a long time and on the site [bodytext] => There was a disgusting pie, that the hobo ate,
Which he found on the street and it wasn't quite neat,
He picked it up and he scoffed it up,
Because he was really quite hungry,
But then he realised it hurt his tummy,
So he puked it out, it sprayed all about and he had to go home hungry! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 7 [informant] => Ed-master [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

The Dirty Pie

Contributed by Ed-master on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 02:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

There was a disgusting pie, that the hobo ate,
Which he found on the street and it wasn't quite neat,
He picked it up and he scoffed it up,
Because he was really quite hungry,
But then he realised it hurt his tummy,
So he puked it out, it sprayed all about and he had to go home hungry!

Copyright © Ed-master ... [ 2008-08-03 02:44:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by PlainFreshRain on Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 03:42:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hi Edmundo!

Welcome to YPDC!

This made me smile, your humor is crude, so I get it...

Keep chugging them out old boy, I like to read your stuff.

Conal

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 01:57:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hey Edmund!!
Cool poem! very- interesting!!
Do you have any other poems??
It was very like you- gross humour!!
Beth

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:42:39 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hey Ed! Again!
I posted a poem-called Death
Beth
(finally!)

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by SLou on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 01:03:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i like it.
sorry, thats all i can say about it really!
sarah

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:57:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hi Edmund like the poem but hobos dont have homes!!!! HA HA!! Funny though! made me smile for once!!

Georgia
p.s on beths user name

Re: The Dirty Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by PlainFreshRain on Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 05:21:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hi Edmund

You have to post more man, I know you have loads buzzing around in your head and copy books!

Stay fresh

Conal

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com