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Array ( [sid] => 144294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Untitled Poem [time] => 2008-08-01 07:39:37 [hometext] => This is for anyone whos ever witness abuse in the household. Its real. [bodytext] => Sit with me and tell me its gonna be okay.
Tell me that the nightmares have gone away.
I don’t need you here so breath me in,
My eyes shut closed so I cant see what’s happening.
Hold me tight, grab my hand , where dropping four feet below the ground.
Quick I think he’s coming don’t make a sound.

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Hiding in the shadows like it will all be right.
He’s hunting for us all day and night.
I just want to tell you that I never meant any of this.
Now my life’s opened into a dark abyss
Hold me close please don’t let me go
Its winter but I see is blood where is all the snow.

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Push me down out of his vision.
Try to keep me out of this collision .
The doors slammed open wide,
Time to play the game so ill go and hide.
Lets hope he doesn’t win
So I don’t have to watch him put a bruise on your skin..

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Hold me close (Until he goes).
Hold me close (until he goes).
Hold me close (until he goes).
The sun has gone , here comes the rain so close the windows.

I never meant to hurt you,
Or cause you pain,
He’s turned being hurt into a game.
I never meant to make your life so bad
If I had never been born you wouldn’t have to see this happen
So hold me close.
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The Untitled Poem

Contributed by liamleash on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 07:39:37 AM in AEST
Topic: surreal



Sit with me and tell me its gonna be okay.
Tell me that the nightmares have gone away.
I don’t need you here so breath me in,
My eyes shut closed so I cant see what’s happening.
Hold me tight, grab my hand , where dropping four feet below the ground.
Quick I think he’s coming don’t make a sound.

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Hiding in the shadows like it will all be right.
He’s hunting for us all day and night.
I just want to tell you that I never meant any of this.
Now my life’s opened into a dark abyss
Hold me close please don’t let me go
Its winter but I see is blood where is all the snow.

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Push me down out of his vision.
Try to keep me out of this collision .
The doors slammed open wide,
Time to play the game so ill go and hide.
Lets hope he doesn’t win
So I don’t have to watch him put a bruise on your skin..

I never meant to hurt you.
It was all a mistake
So shake me until from this hell I awake.
Why is he so angry , causing all this pain.
The sun has gone so close the window cause here comes the rain.

Hold me close (Until he goes).
Hold me close (until he goes).
Hold me close (until he goes).
The sun has gone , here comes the rain so close the windows.

I never meant to hurt you,
Or cause you pain,
He’s turned being hurt into a game.
I never meant to make your life so bad
If I had never been born you wouldn’t have to see this happen
So hold me close.




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Re: The Untitled Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Cayleigh-Chan on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:38:33 AM AEST
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Wow, that was so sad.
It really stands out to people who really have seen abuse in the making.

Great job!

~Cayleigh-chan


Re: The Untitled Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:55:38 AM AEST
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Yes haunted me while reading it. I understand every minute of it. So darn sad....... I hope for your sake you are out of that situation if you aren't go now it does not get better believe me.

Lovely write

hugs and more hugs for you

Michelle


Re: The Untitled Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by liamleash on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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Ive never seen or witnessed abuse myself, i just wrote this as i know many people my age whos like that x


Re: The Untitled Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Kool4ever on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 09:50:34 AM AEST
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I was abused both psychically and emotionally by my ex, I hate talking about it but sometimes it makes me feel better.




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