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Buried in the earth to rot
Daily after my soul you sought
Banished to the depths of Hell
You said I had more stories to tell

Searching until I was in your view
Touching my heart with your “I Love You”
Without warning I was removed from that place
Resurrected, the living world once again to face

Here by the grace of God and the love that flows from you
Messages to deliver, both some old and some new
Thank you for caring for me my dear precious friend
I will always love you, until the very end

Deadwriter
07/30/2008

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Unfinished Business

Contributed by deadwriter on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 11:24:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Unfinished Business

Buried in the earth to rot
Daily after my soul you sought
Banished to the depths of Hell
You said I had more stories to tell

Searching until I was in your view
Touching my heart with your “I Love You”
Without warning I was removed from that place
Resurrected, the living world once again to face

Here by the grace of God and the love that flows from you
Messages to deliver, both some old and some new
Thank you for caring for me my dear precious friend
I will always love you, until the very end

Deadwriter
07/30/2008

Copyright Â© deadwriter ... [ 2008-07-31 11:24:53]
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Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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Claps hands super write and I am glad you are back. I was gonna get mad if you were gone again dang it.

hugs
Michelle

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 02:30:17 PM AEST
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This is quite the deadly love poem.
Awesome write.

Glad to see you back...............Mike

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by calebcrain on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 02:55:48 PM AEST
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its great to have people that care enough to pull you out of whatever hell life may throw at you

loved your poem.

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 03:13:53 PM AEST
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Nice write..
Jenni

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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I have to agree with everyone else. brilliant love poem. It is always nice to have someone like that...that stands by you through thick and thin. Glad to see you are back....I have a new piece for you to read as well....Welcome back..

Rich

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 10:03:40 PM AEST
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DAMN... Deadwriter...

That was great.

Reminds me of the style I write in most of the time.

I really enjoyed this.

~ZiggyB

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:06:23 AM AEST
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a very lovely poem.. I loved the wording..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 03:49:57 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, great write

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:22:52 PM AEST
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Glad your back, everyone needs a good friend, lucky you. Continue sharing your thoughts.

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 01:54:20 AM AEST
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beautifully written, friends are amazing creatures...

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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To be pulled up from the depths of hell, they must have great inner strength...and a lot of persistence! Great tribute to a friend!

Re: Unfinished Business (User Rating: 1 )
by theurbanpoet on Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 03:26:05 PM AEST
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Another wonderful poem! It feels like you channel your grief from losing a close friend in to poetry! It works! Beautiful!

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