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Array ( [sid] => 144269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That Subway Sandwich [time] => 2008-07-31 04:09:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I met you on the first day of my period-- or Kool Aid as you would so have it named
For the next twenty-eight days you stuck to my body with your sweet words and gentle touches
You came inside of me-- physically, but even deeper emotionally
I enjoyed your presence, but did not know, that like the lining of my uterine walls you would soon be gone.

The twenty-eighth day was the last I heard from you.
But with not hearing from you came no real pain-- only a slight cramp that could be relieved with some Advil
The twenty-eighth day was the beginning of a new cycle
For you, my summer menstral cycle, had passed. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 1019 [topic] => 22 [informant] => RedFlavor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

That Subway Sandwich

Contributed by RedFlavor on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 04:09:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I met you on the first day of my period-- or Kool Aid as you would so have it named
For the next twenty-eight days you stuck to my body with your sweet words and gentle touches
You came inside of me-- physically, but even deeper emotionally
I enjoyed your presence, but did not know, that like the lining of my uterine walls you would soon be gone.

The twenty-eighth day was the last I heard from you.
But with not hearing from you came no real pain-- only a slight cramp that could be relieved with some Advil
The twenty-eighth day was the beginning of a new cycle
For you, my summer menstral cycle, had passed.

Copyright © RedFlavor ... [ 2008-07-31 04:09:05]
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Re: That Subway Sandwich (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:55:57 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc......

Well I must say this is an interesting write..... Never read anything quite like it.

Though the subject content was a little bit more information than I cared to read lol.....

I will be watching for more of your work.......

different topic maybe??(winks)

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