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Array ( [sid] => 14417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Favor To Ask [time] => 2003-03-17 16:40:00 [hometext] => For someone who tortures me more than he knows, and still manages to sweep me completely off my feet [bodytext] => You ask me how I interpret you
Then tell me how you interpret me
You tell me that you want to have three kids
And you don't care if they're all girls
Even though you do want a boy
You say that you're not just a jock
That you have feelings
And it's hard to tell if you're serious or not
But either way, I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my head?

Your hair is a little long
Especially in the back
And it's obvious that you haven't
Shaved in a little while
A word I would use to describe you
Would have to be scruffy
And a little unkept, but in a good way
Because you're still as cute as ever
And so, I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my sight?

You flirt with me shamelessly
Like tomorrows and consequences
Don't even exist
You trip me as I walk around the house
Or rest your hand on my knee
Or whisper as you nod suggestively
At dark empty rooms
Then break into a huge smile
And it's only fair that I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my heart? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Savannah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Favor To Ask

Contributed by Savannah on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You ask me how I interpret you
Then tell me how you interpret me
You tell me that you want to have three kids
And you don't care if they're all girls
Even though you do want a boy
You say that you're not just a jock
That you have feelings
And it's hard to tell if you're serious or not
But either way, I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my head?

Your hair is a little long
Especially in the back
And it's obvious that you haven't
Shaved in a little while
A word I would use to describe you
Would have to be scruffy
And a little unkept, but in a good way
Because you're still as cute as ever
And so, I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my sight?

You flirt with me shamelessly
Like tomorrows and consequences
Don't even exist
You trip me as I walk around the house
Or rest your hand on my knee
Or whisper as you nod suggestively
At dark empty rooms
Then break into a huge smile
And it's only fair that I have a favor to ask
Could you just get out of my heart?




Copyright © Savannah ... [ 2003-03-17 16:40:00]
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Re: A Favor To Ask (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:48:18 PM AEST
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Oh Wow ... I really loved this poem. Excellent writing. Five stars ... Jan


Re: A Favor To Ask (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 08:11:29 AM AEST
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I used to know someone who made me feel like this. I gave him up and I felt much better for doing it!! Hurt like hell at the time but it was definately the right thing for me - might not be for you.

Great poem anyway!!

sleepless_siren




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