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Eyes of deep sapphire flame
Upon another world she shall fall
And remember naught save her name
For love of one who is cursed she must die
In order to regain her wings and fly
With this her reawakening shall be done
Angel of Ruin; Bearer of Destruction,
Over evil she will triumph in the age to come
Against our world she shall prevail
She is called The Nightingale…

** I am starting a script for my own graphic novel about the character I created (Nightingale), this is her legend, the world she comes from is ruled by evil and they call her "The Angel of Ruin"; just a start really but I felt like posting** :) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 40 [informant] => muinanyere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Ancient Legend

Contributed by muinanyere on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:16:41 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Daughter of God and Mortal
Eyes of deep sapphire flame
Upon another world she shall fall
And remember naught save her name
For love of one who is cursed she must die
In order to regain her wings and fly
With this her reawakening shall be done
Angel of Ruin; Bearer of Destruction,
Over evil she will triumph in the age to come
Against our world she shall prevail
She is called The Nightingale…

** I am starting a script for my own graphic novel about the character I created (Nightingale), this is her legend, the world she comes from is ruled by evil and they call her "The Angel of Ruin"; just a start really but I felt like posting** :)

Copyright Â© muinanyere ... [ 2008-07-25 10:16:41]
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Re: Ancient Legend (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:53:48 PM AEST
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This is really awesome.. Best Wishes with your graphic novel....
Jenni

Re: Ancient Legend (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 03:29:24 PM AEST
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this is really really awesome! the tone, the word choice, the flow-- everything, its perfect! your graphic novel is off to an incredible start!!

Re: Ancient Legend (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 11:49:15 AM AEST
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This is a great beginning to what I am sure will be an awesome novel. I will be in line to get one of the first copies.

Deadwriter

Re: Ancient Legend (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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Wow what a powerful poem it really speaks to you, i wish you all the very best with your novel it should be awesome.
Starchild

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