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no no just to yourself
all you wanted to be isn't what i really see

Forgetting all that was
why am I here now?
I see the future but not with you
drive me to the edge of myself

whats left is what you created
screw who i really am because I just don't know anymore

*Vampyresss Jenni* [comments] => 9 [counter] => 330 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

forget what is (an idea i got from a song)

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

number 1 to me
no no just to yourself
all you wanted to be isn't what i really see

Forgetting all that was
why am I here now?
I see the future but not with you
drive me to the edge of myself

whats left is what you created
screw who i really am because I just don't know anymore

*Vampyresss Jenni*

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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:06:48 AM AEST
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V-Jenni,

How profound that I just went through the
same feelings. So much said in so few
words. Awesome........Mike

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:34:50 AM AEST
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Ouch..this is rough.. Deep write..
Jenni

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:01:07 PM AEST
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I feel this way right now, this is a really heart wrenching poem, good write

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 02:45:55 AM AEST
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Powerfully expressed, this is something I can relate to in the current path of my life.

Peace my friend

~Shannon

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:05:37 AM AEST
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Jenni..sometimes it gets so bad outside my cave" I just throw the door open before! coffee, and scream "do me! lol.I know this feeling. very good write, short but that might say more. Crow

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:24:28 AM AEST
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You are unlike anyone else.

Everyone has this experience at one time or another.

In the words of Helen Steiner Rice, "This Too Shall Pass"

All will end well.

~Stephan

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by iloveyouso on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 08:38:58 AM AEST
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this is brilliant

Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:59:10 AM AEST
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screw who i really am because I just don't know anymore . . .

wow, i've just met a new poet named Jenn

this is more powerful than usual and i can

feel your hurt and fragilness, you've revealed

pain in all it's imeasurable despicable sides

in your usual manner of honesty fused with

artistry, a most remarkable teastament to

what a woman feels, coming from the darker

side of love . . .

Ben . . .

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