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Walking in the darkness
Smokes his cigarette
Burning in the madness
He’ll come and find you yet.

Hear footsteps wicked echo
Open up the door
Nothing but a shadow
A shadow… nothing more.

Rushing to your window
Just to see a mist
But not a coolness in it
There’s tobacco strung in this.

The pavement speaks his tale
Message in the dark
His wings are but a whisper
Mocking you so stark.

Whips you with his leather
Ties you with his chains
Place you in the graveyard
Spilling out your veins.

But he has a madness
A melancholy glee
To those without an evil
Gifts his laugh to thee.

For Crow – hope you like it.
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Crow

Contributed by wheels on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Walking in the darkness
Smokes his cigarette
Burning in the madness
He’ll come and find you yet.

Hear footsteps wicked echo
Open up the door
Nothing but a shadow
A shadow… nothing more.

Rushing to your window
Just to see a mist
But not a coolness in it
There’s tobacco strung in this.

The pavement speaks his tale
Message in the dark
His wings are but a whisper
Mocking you so stark.

Whips you with his leather
Ties you with his chains
Place you in the graveyard
Spilling out your veins.

But he has a madness
A melancholy glee
To those without an evil
Gifts his laugh to thee.

For Crow – hope you like it.

Copyright Â© wheels ... [ 2008-07-24 11:30:05]
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Re: Crow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:59:50 AM AEST
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OMG Kevin,
I will tell you right now he is gonna love this!
Incredible write........... He is gonna smile as wide as I am. You rock!

hugs
Michelle

Re: Crow (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:45:46 PM AEST
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very nice,

wiz

Re: Crow (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:50:26 PM AEST
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This is great he will really enjoy this I can hear his laughter now very well written

Shari

Re: Crow (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:53:20 AM AEST
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thank you Wheels! you don`t know how close you really came...lol! I do like this.
Look for Me in the Boneyards" lol! thanks again. Crow

Re: Crow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:29:02 PM AEST
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LOL.... this made me laugh.. I can only imagine the meaning behind this... but it's really nice...
Jenni

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