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Array ( [sid] => 14413 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Freedom's Coming [time] => 2003-03-17 15:20:00 [hometext] => Note: This poem, as well as many of my others, are simply artistic expression and reflect neither my own desire nor intent. [bodytext] => Stagnant pools of dying life
Dot this tree-starved land
They cover a rough and dry terrain
Like the palm of a calloused hand

I have wondered to this place
From far, far abroad
With my soul prepared
Though my heart's torn and flawed

I find a brittle yet suitable tree
And then while preparing the noose,
I think of how things will be
When, finally, I am loosed [comments] => 5 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 36 [informant] => GregoryGreen04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

My Freedom's Coming

Contributed by GregoryGreen04 on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Stagnant pools of dying life
Dot this tree-starved land
They cover a rough and dry terrain
Like the palm of a calloused hand

I have wondered to this place
From far, far abroad
With my soul prepared
Though my heart's torn and flawed

I find a brittle yet suitable tree
And then while preparing the noose,
I think of how things will be
When, finally, I am loosed

Copyright © GregoryGreen04 ... [ 2003-03-17 15:20:00]
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Re: My Freedom's Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:46:00 PM AEST
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i think this is excellent, and i love the note, this i can appreciate:)

Re: My Freedom's Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:42:27 PM AEST
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Wow this was very descriptive and well written. I liked this a lot I really did. The imagery you put in this poem is amazing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: My Freedom's Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:54:51 PM AEST
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What a surprise ending ... very well written ... enjoyed this one... Jan

Re: My Freedom's Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:34:44 AM AEST
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not what i expected....or was even looking for...but great write none the less... tahnk you for sharing

Lindsey

Re: My Freedom's Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:36:00 AM AEST
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Love the imagery!! Not what I expected from the title but it is strange how fitting the title is. A monderful piece of writing!!

sleepless_siren

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