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Array ( [sid] => 144129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cinderella's Revenge [time] => 2008-07-24 10:42:00 [hometext] => This is narrative i had to write for english <3. Ohh its really kind of piteful :) [bodytext] => Cinderella had found her prince charming.
She found him at the ball, and he was a darling.
He filled her life with warmth and light,
but her sisters would not leave it without a fight.
they thought that Cinderella didn't deserve the prince,
they washed her mouth with soap and wouldn't let her rinse.
So finally one day the prince had enough!
He sent his best friends to play a bluff.
They lied to the sisters and deceited,
leaving them feeling defeated.
So finally Cinderella had her happily ever after
Leaving her life free of those disasters. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 31 [informant] => rania [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Cinderella's Revenge

Contributed by rania on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 10:42:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Cinderella had found her prince charming.
She found him at the ball, and he was a darling.
He filled her life with warmth and light,
but her sisters would not leave it without a fight.
they thought that Cinderella didn't deserve the prince,
they washed her mouth with soap and wouldn't let her rinse.
So finally one day the prince had enough!
He sent his best friends to play a bluff.
They lied to the sisters and deceited,
leaving them feeling defeated.
So finally Cinderella had her happily ever after
Leaving her life free of those disasters.

Copyright © rania ... [ 2008-07-24 10:42:00]
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Re: Cinderella's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:54:35 AM AEST
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this is so cute :) i love it! especially the last two lines. great write!!

Re: Cinderella's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by beautiful_letdowns on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 03:23:20 PM AEST
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the soap part is really cute.. haha oh this put a smile on my face... thanks for posting :) keep posting more!!

Re: Cinderella's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by rania on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:20:30 PM AEST
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aww thank you very much :]
i just wanted something that sounded really fun. it really didn't have to make sence too :)
it made me happy. and it was really random
but thanks for the support and im glad you enjoyed it

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