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going about our normal lives,
saying were happy, everythings fine,
when really, we are all dying inside.

I see your pain, as you see mine,
two ordinary people, lost in this ordinary time.

I look into your eyes and tell you, your special,
you mean more than the world to me.
Emotional tears fall. Open your heart,
perhaps then I can make you see.

To the world we are nothing,
just two people, living but dead.
To eachother we are the world,
touching, tasting, nothing need be said.

All I ask is for your trust,
and ill give you love, with no strings.
I promise you, my ordinary boy,
with me you will experience, extra-ordinary things.
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Ordinary Person

Contributed by Thespia on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 06:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We are all the same,
going about our normal lives,
saying were happy, everythings fine,
when really, we are all dying inside.

I see your pain, as you see mine,
two ordinary people, lost in this ordinary time.

I look into your eyes and tell you, your special,
you mean more than the world to me.
Emotional tears fall. Open your heart,
perhaps then I can make you see.

To the world we are nothing,
just two people, living but dead.
To eachother we are the world,
touching, tasting, nothing need be said.

All I ask is for your trust,
and ill give you love, with no strings.
I promise you, my ordinary boy,
with me you will experience, extra-ordinary things.

Copyright © Thespia ... [ 2008-07-22 18:30:18]
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Re: Ordinary Person (User Rating: 1 )
by DjFreshmatic on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 08:08:19 PM AEST
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I really liked your poem it sounds like something I would of write very good

Re: Ordinary Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 11:37:57 PM AEST
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Hi Sarah,
This is really deep... The first stanza drew me in..and the last line had me smiling.... Nothing ordinary about this write, my friend...
Jenni

Re: Ordinary Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Bubbles02 on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:40:04 PM AEST
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I loved the last 2 lines! They were so cute. Nice job.

Re: Ordinary Person (User Rating: 1 )
by humanity on Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 05:51:14 PM AEST
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beautiful, very touching.

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