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Array ( [sid] => 144084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Echo~ [time] => 2008-07-22 12:23:54 [hometext] => her memory is still with me [bodytext] => She moves like the wind,
silent but she is there.
I could almost hear her laughter
floating through the canyons
drifting into the muddy stream
then at once gone, moving like the wind.

Shivering in the heat of sun
thinking of fading memories
laughter I thought I heard
like the wind, here then there
she is gone, she couldn’t stay.

Maybe its her whisper
that crawls near my pillow at night
rises me from sleep
snakes beneath the covers
then floats out the window
brushing lacy curtains

One can never be sure
such a strong force once in life
maybe her spirit does float
light like the wind
I hear her voice
I remember echo………………

[comments] => 9 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 48 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

~Echo~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 12:23:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She moves like the wind,
silent but she is there.
I could almost hear her laughter
floating through the canyons
drifting into the muddy stream
then at once gone, moving like the wind.

Shivering in the heat of sun
thinking of fading memories
laughter I thought I heard
like the wind, here then there
she is gone, she couldn’t stay.

Maybe its her whisper
that crawls near my pillow at night
rises me from sleep
snakes beneath the covers
then floats out the window
brushing lacy curtains

One can never be sure
such a strong force once in life
maybe her spirit does float
light like the wind
I hear her voice
I remember echo………………

Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2008-07-22 12:23:54]
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Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 12:25:39 PM AEST
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this is just simply beautiful.. loved the imagery

Rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:20:05 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful write. Isn't it amazing how close some one can seem even long after they have left us?

Thanks for sharing such beauty.
Carol

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:21:28 PM AEST
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there is always a mark people leave on us in our journey through this world. good work hon. Crow

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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lovely

Shari

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 01:29:33 AM AEST
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Your emotions are strong enough, wish you good luck.

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:26:03 AM AEST
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this is so touching. really beautiful poem, i love it!

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 03:45:14 PM AEST
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I love the tittle shel, and the beauty of this peice does just that, echo in my imagination
beautiful work my friend as always, an artist
of rare distinction, you are . . .

((((Michelle))))

Ben . . .

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:26:25 AM AEST
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Oh sweetie, I think this is some of your VERY best work!! I adore this. So soft and gentle-
like a tender caress in the middle of the night. Like a gentle kiss from a lover's timid lips.
You captured the beauty of memory so well, hun and with such a poetic flare. There isn't
a thing in this I could single out, for it is altogether captivating and gorgeous!

Missing someone can bring out such magnificent thoughts, no?

*huge hugs*

~ Breezy

Re: ~Echo~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:15:20 PM AEST
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Another brilliant piece. I have always enjoyed reading your work and I always will. I have to agree that this might be some of your best work though. Your imagery is amazing...draws the reader in.

forgive me please for my stupidity.

Rich

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