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Array ( [sid] => 144077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Say your always forever~ [time] => 2008-07-22 07:16:42 [hometext] => ok the new version of the song, composed by (crow) and Shelby.. there is music with it now thanks to my man Lane Love you! [bodytext] => You are free to fly the mountains, and the valleys far below,
No hurt or pain, is it just farewell..
We promised never good-bye....

You have always been forever
always been My friend
I looked beside Me where You always stand
"in a blink of My eyes you were gone...

I will rest right here till I see You
Remember You with a sweet, sweet smile
I`ll see your face, with each seasons change
and know Your not really gone....

You know its come down to Me now,
I need to tell You again
that its this heart that fights a cold, cold wind
till I see You once more.
-----------
Please say Your always forever,
cause ..I need to hear that again..
I looked beside Me, and Your not there,..
" in that blink of My eyes you were gone..

You know its come down to Me now
Cause..I need to hear it again...but,
"In that blink of My eyes You were gone....


Please say "We are always forever...
I need to hear that again... [end here]



Lane I cannot express what this has meant to me and Uncle Dale, being the lover of fine music he was is in fact he is dancing in Heaven right now. He hears these words and your beautiful music. Thanks so much.

Hug big big kisses and more hugs
I love you I do I do!
~Michelle~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 55 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
~Say your always forever~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 07:16:42 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You are free to fly the mountains, and the valleys far below,
No hurt or pain, is it just farewell..
We promised never good-bye....

You have always been forever
always been My friend
I looked beside Me where You always stand
"in a blink of My eyes you were gone...

I will rest right here till I see You
Remember You with a sweet, sweet smile
I`ll see your face, with each seasons change
and know Your not really gone....

You know its come down to Me now,
I need to tell You again
that its this heart that fights a cold, cold wind
till I see You once more.
-----------
Please say Your always forever,
cause ..I need to hear that again..
I looked beside Me, and Your not there,..
" in that blink of My eyes you were gone..

You know its come down to Me now
Cause..I need to hear it again...but,
"In that blink of My eyes You were gone....


Please say "We are always forever...
I need to hear that again... [end here]



Lane I cannot express what this has meant to me and Uncle Dale, being the lover of fine music he was is in fact he is dancing in Heaven right now. He hears these words and your beautiful music. Thanks so much.

Hug big big kisses and more hugs
I love you I do I do!
~Michelle~




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-22 07:16:42]
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Re: ~Say your always forever~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 10:47:17 AM AEST
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wonderful...and thank you Lane for helping Shel out.

Love ya both
Shari


Re: ~Say your always forever~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 12:04:44 PM AEST
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Brilliant!! Loved this...
Jenni


Re: ~Say your always forever~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 12:25:18 PM AEST
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thank you Shel..I`ll get it trimed-up and real this week. thank you for writing it, I know you were close to your uncle..
"You know its come down to Me now"
ain`t that a real truth in loss. I love you too Hon. Lane,


Re: ~Say your always forever~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:09:32 PM AEST
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It is even more beautiful than the first version. I am sure that you uncle loves it. You continue to amaze....you and Lane still write beautifully together.

Rich




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