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Array ( [sid] => 144051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Floating in My Wake [time] => 2008-07-21 07:49:06 [hometext] => Written together with SHELBY - my sweet friend Michelle [bodytext] => I drifted…
A piece of wood
Cork within my bottle
Off to other plains of understanding
Lost in the mystic abyss of my soul
Loving the moment
And nothing…
But your voice from above
Giving wind into my sails.

Dare I dream of floating forever
Right here in this river vast.
Listening to the song of your memory
Or just let the moments softly pass.
Passing through the night
Holding you….
This moment in my arms
Drifting in a dream
Smile upon your face
A smile that is gift of grace
For this moment there is no blue
Just a beautiful hushed dream of you.

A dream whereby you settle
Dripping into my thoughts
Ever to hold me in your spell
Cast upon the eve
Wind into the sail
Drifting on the sea
Upon which holds my heart

You pass my thoughts
Adrift so sweet and tender
Like a summer wind ripples in the trees
I have you near my side forever
Tucked in sweet memories
Floating in my wake.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wheels [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Floating in My Wake

Contributed by wheels on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 07:49:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I drifted…
A piece of wood
Cork within my bottle
Off to other plains of understanding
Lost in the mystic abyss of my soul
Loving the moment
And nothing…
But your voice from above
Giving wind into my sails.

Dare I dream of floating forever
Right here in this river vast.
Listening to the song of your memory
Or just let the moments softly pass.
Passing through the night
Holding you….
This moment in my arms
Drifting in a dream
Smile upon your face
A smile that is gift of grace
For this moment there is no blue
Just a beautiful hushed dream of you.

A dream whereby you settle
Dripping into my thoughts
Ever to hold me in your spell
Cast upon the eve
Wind into the sail
Drifting on the sea
Upon which holds my heart

You pass my thoughts
Adrift so sweet and tender
Like a summer wind ripples in the trees
I have you near my side forever
Tucked in sweet memories
Floating in my wake.




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Re: Floating in My Wake (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 08:01:58 AM AEST
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beautifully done you two write well together

Shari


Re: Floating in My Wake (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:53:39 AM AEST
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Great beauty between the two of you, take care Valerie


Re: Floating in My Wake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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Wonderful write my friends. This is so
beautiful. It just carried me away........Mike


Re: Floating in My Wake (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 06:55:31 AM AEST
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Flowed beautifully......i could see peace and tranqulity in the words. Great job. I hope to write one day like this.


brew~




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