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Array ( [sid] => 144000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => muder through suicide [time] => 2008-07-18 17:05:25 [hometext] => ( I have many lost love poems, but im glad to say I have the girl I want) Though I have been left heart broken [bodytext] => Bullets rest in the barrel

Hearts scream just pull the trigger

But his finger never moves

Death lay before him

Yet all he sees is you

Then questions why

And in this silence

His thoughts become clear

Gazing at his escape

Selfishness

What scars are left

For them to bare

If he lets metal

Slip through skin

With one last wish

He smiles

For the first time

Hazel eyes glimpse more then you

Hope brings an end

To this dreaded night

Dreams finely put you to rest

As he sleeps in wait for a perfect dawn

The murder of crows watching

Desolate eyes now wide open

Come see what love has broken

Selfishness

What scars are left

For them to bare

If he lets metal

Slip through skin

With one last wish

He smiles

Screams ring out when morning breaks

Cold hands with no embrace

To still to hold a gun

Your picture rest in his palm

His lungs forgot how to breathe

Lost in eternal sleep

Your murder through his suicide

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sorrowsofabrokenheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
muder through suicide

Contributed by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Bullets rest in the barrel

Hearts scream just pull the trigger

But his finger never moves

Death lay before him

Yet all he sees is you

Then questions why

And in this silence

His thoughts become clear

Gazing at his escape

Selfishness

What scars are left

For them to bare

If he lets metal

Slip through skin

With one last wish

He smiles

For the first time

Hazel eyes glimpse more then you

Hope brings an end

To this dreaded night

Dreams finely put you to rest

As he sleeps in wait for a perfect dawn

The murder of crows watching

Desolate eyes now wide open

Come see what love has broken

Selfishness

What scars are left

For them to bare

If he lets metal

Slip through skin

With one last wish

He smiles

Screams ring out when morning breaks

Cold hands with no embrace

To still to hold a gun

Your picture rest in his palm

His lungs forgot how to breathe

Lost in eternal sleep

Your murder through his suicide





Copyright © sorrowsofabrokenheart ... [ 2008-07-18 17:05:25]
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