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Array ( [sid] => 143988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Hell is coming~ [time] => 2008-07-18 08:35:54 [hometext] => cowrite/ Rich and Michelle [bodytext] => I am coming and bringing hell with me
day of reckoning is knocking on your door
devils breath and the fire are looming
the bells of hell are tolling near midnights hour.

In midst and shadow the watcher is near
eyes wide open you wont see it coming
No hollow ground in which for you to walk
there is no saving now, beware the messenger is walking.

Dragons breath, old folk lore, oh no.
The fire shall be brought down upon you.
No pleading, no cries will save your soul
you the wolf walking in lambs wool.

Lightening my step as I take vengeance
Against those that have wronged me
As well as rest of this pathetic excuse for humanity

Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by my side
All the while my victims sleep unknowing

All the while the walls watch silently
Icy fingers claw up a slumbering spine
Nightmares run the mind’s highway like blood thirsty vigilantes
Looking for their next unsuspecting prey

Do you feel eyes boring into you soul,
blazing into your heart, making your blood boil.
Melting you into a small puddle,
mixtures of what you deserve.

Hell is coming, time to pay your dues............ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~Hell is coming~

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 08:35:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am coming and bringing hell with me
day of reckoning is knocking on your door
devils breath and the fire are looming
the bells of hell are tolling near midnights hour.

In midst and shadow the watcher is near
eyes wide open you wont see it coming
No hollow ground in which for you to walk
there is no saving now, beware the messenger is walking.

Dragons breath, old folk lore, oh no.
The fire shall be brought down upon you.
No pleading, no cries will save your soul
you the wolf walking in lambs wool.

Lightening my step as I take vengeance
Against those that have wronged me
As well as rest of this pathetic excuse for humanity

Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by my side
All the while my victims sleep unknowing

All the while the walls watch silently
Icy fingers claw up a slumbering spine
Nightmares run the mind’s highway like blood thirsty vigilantes
Looking for their next unsuspecting prey

Do you feel eyes boring into you soul,
blazing into your heart, making your blood boil.
Melting you into a small puddle,
mixtures of what you deserve.

Hell is coming, time to pay your dues............

Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2008-07-18 08:35:54]
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Re: ~Hell is coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 10:29:51 AM AEST
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oh wow how eerie this is.. I love the imagery and Its darkness!! I always love your dark writes.. they are always so erie and intensely spooky.. great job

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Hell is coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:20:21 PM AEST
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Hey you two,

You know I am not a fan of the dark side
unless it is really good.

"Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by my side
All the while my victims sleep unknowing"

How much darker can you get, yet beautifully
written......Awesome.....Mike

Re: ~Hell is coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:51:33 PM AEST
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aaagh this is the coolest thing ive ever read. INCREDIBLE!

Re: ~Hell is coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 08:00:07 PM AEST
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I couldnt have come up with a better ending if I had tried. And the title fit perfectly. No matter what we seem to write together we always seem to get rave reviews. This turned out really good....WOW!!!! Sometimes wonder where we come up with the things that we write...
I will write another one with you whenever you want my friend.

Rich

Re: ~Hell is coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 07:33:09 AM AEST
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this is VERY good..great job you two. rich the ending is just fine I think. Crow

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