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Array ( [sid] => 143978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Notes. [time] => 2008-07-18 00:25:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tarnished dreams
Silent screams
Black rose petals
Stitched at the seams
Wedding bells
Ring out like shotgun shells
Love is sick and twisted
Got me double fisted
Unspoken and heartbroken
My suffering is amazing
With both guns blazing
I am a fire waiting to burn
With absolutely no concern
Blue eyes stained black
You stabbed me in the back
Now look at my perception
Stained with deception
No passion, no lust
No loyalty, no trust
Nothing good left of anything
Not a single damn thing
Nowhere to belong
Sad songs make me sing along
Too weak to be strong
I was victimized
Turned traumatized
Now I simply just despise society
High anxiety
Mixed with sadness
Sheer utter madness
I am a lethal potion
Of every painful emotion
I get no rest
Thunderstorms in my chest
Raining pain
Too hard to contain
So I bleed it away
Day after day
As the drugs conceal me
I wait for time to heal me
But that's a joke
This heart will always be broke
Just look at this poem I wrote
Anger bleeding through every note
But it is what it is
And that's all it's ever going to be
There's nothing left of me
But a shell of hostility
A walking ghost
Lord knows I miss you
But I miss me most
And with that...
This poem ends. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 75 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Bleeding Notes.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 12:25:32 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Tarnished dreams
Silent screams
Black rose petals
Stitched at the seams
Wedding bells
Ring out like shotgun shells
Love is sick and twisted
Got me double fisted
Unspoken and heartbroken
My suffering is amazing
With both guns blazing
I am a fire waiting to burn
With absolutely no concern
Blue eyes stained black
You stabbed me in the back
Now look at my perception
Stained with deception
No passion, no lust
No loyalty, no trust
Nothing good left of anything
Not a single damn thing
Nowhere to belong
Sad songs make me sing along
Too weak to be strong
I was victimized
Turned traumatized
Now I simply just despise society
High anxiety
Mixed with sadness
Sheer utter madness
I am a lethal potion
Of every painful emotion
I get no rest
Thunderstorms in my chest
Raining pain
Too hard to contain
So I bleed it away
Day after day
As the drugs conceal me
I wait for time to heal me
But that's a joke
This heart will always be broke
Just look at this poem I wrote
Anger bleeding through every note
But it is what it is
And that's all it's ever going to be
There's nothing left of me
But a shell of hostility
A walking ghost
Lord knows I miss you
But I miss me most
And with that...
This poem ends.




Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2008-07-18 00:25:32]
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Re: Bleeding Notes. (User Rating: 1 )
by xxILoveTheSilencexx on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:27:40 AM AEST
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evry deep, emotional, hurtfelt, and angry.
I can relate very much right now.
the only thing you'll ever want to do is claw the persons eyes out.
but only because u still love them.
grrrrr.
love is pointless.


Re: Bleeding Notes. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 07:42:55 AM AEST
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another marvelous beautiful write from you.. your poems are always full of depth and passion of the heart.. just brilliant

rock on,

vampyress Jenni




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