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Array ( [sid] => 143976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Think I'm Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix [time] => 2008-07-17 23:08:43 [hometext] => This is a cut-up poem that I wrote for my creative writing class. I wrote it by cutting out different words and phrases out of magazines and newspapers and rearranging them. [bodytext] => Think I’m Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix

Even though they all looked happy spending midnight in the sun,
by night fall she is hoarse from all of this talk from the naked and the dead.
They tell her to
let the lovefest begin.

Citrus flame, how you tempt me.
Sweet surprise, I got a love.
I am the wave, fueled by the light,
I watch the words fall from your mouth, mutilating my face.
You ask, what happens when the grace is gone?
Or how do you measure a master?
Or even are their lips real?

Hooked since fifteen, I couldn’t lie, even if you asked me to.
Nope, not pregnant.
And yes, her lips felt velvety smooth,
I remember kissing them at the moon.

— Good for business, you know,
We made a sex tape-- he was super sperm, I was power egg.
That ain’t a bad thing but I need a guy who doesn’t feel the need for speed.
Even snow angels need some hot stuff from time to time.
Caliente.

We were fueled by the light,
This is how it ended, shattered by the light that would not stay.
Sweet tragedy,
I couldn’t ask for a more lethal combination.


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Think I'm Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix

Contributed by sylvias on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 11:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Think I’m Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix

Even though they all looked happy spending midnight in the sun,
by night fall she is hoarse from all of this talk from the naked and the dead.
They tell her to
let the lovefest begin.

Citrus flame, how you tempt me.
Sweet surprise, I got a love.
I am the wave, fueled by the light,
I watch the words fall from your mouth, mutilating my face.
You ask, what happens when the grace is gone?
Or how do you measure a master?
Or even are their lips real?

Hooked since fifteen, I couldn’t lie, even if you asked me to.
Nope, not pregnant.
And yes, her lips felt velvety smooth,
I remember kissing them at the moon.

— Good for business, you know,
We made a sex tape-- he was super sperm, I was power egg.
That ain’t a bad thing but I need a guy who doesn’t feel the need for speed.
Even snow angels need some hot stuff from time to time.
Caliente.

We were fueled by the light,
This is how it ended, shattered by the light that would not stay.
Sweet tragedy,
I couldn’t ask for a more lethal combination.






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Re: Think I'm Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:42:23 AM AEST
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You are not weird, gave me an idea on what to do to entertain myself late at night. You are creating talent.

Reck


Re: Think I'm Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 07:23:44 AM AEST
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Very Dada-ist. It worked well, and it certainly says something about the words found in magazines. Excellent idea, and well carried out.


Re: Think I'm Weird Now- Add Alcohol to the Mix (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:36:49 PM AEST
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Agreed, neat concept . I like the way
it turned out...........Mike




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