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[aid] => mick
[title] => WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
[time] => 2008-07-16 04:28:30
[hometext] => sometimes, I see more than meets the eye
[bodytext] => Rendering thoughts...Wondering, if I choose the right paths of life
I do try and see more for many reasons
I try to see the good in most, and over look the evil
But seems the evil, over takes and powers the eyes...
Makes things become blind,helpless, and under powering
How can I change
How can I see differently
What can one do to not hurt, ...but Not to be hurt, either...
Should I be like evil?
Take people for granted
In Hopes, things will subside....
Or keep being my self, and choosing to be....Me....
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[topicname] => selfstruggles
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WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 04:28:30 AM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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Rendering thoughts...Wondering, if I choose the right paths of life
I do try and see more for many reasons
I try to see the good in most, and over look the evil
But seems the evil, over takes and powers the eyes...
Makes things become blind,helpless, and under powering
How can I change
How can I see differently
What can one do to not hurt, ...but Not to be hurt, either...
Should I be like evil?
Take people for granted
In Hopes, things will subside....
Or keep being my self, and choosing to be....Me....
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brew
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 05:18:18 AM AEST
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Choose the road straight ahead, my friend... and continue being YOU... the fine person that you are....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 06:06:41 AM AEST
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You have captured my feelings so perfectly right now.
The dang paths sometimes are confusing........
Meaning of life even worse but like Jen said be you and keep doing what you are doing ....... Sadly the EVIL in this world and in people will stay but we can shine the best we know how to.......
Hugs and super hugs
Michelle |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 08:34:11 AM AEST
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Sweetie, your last line sums it up. You should continue to be you. But know,
people will get hurt, (including ourselves), no matter WHAT path we lay
our sights on. It's just a fact of life. All we can do is strive to be the good
people we are and try to be as kind and charitable as possible. (Something
you are great at!! =D )
Profound thoughts, hun. *hugs to you* You'll be great ! Just continue being
the lovely person that is inside.
~Breezy
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:38:38 AM AEST
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Great write. Makes one think.
Be who you are and know that you
have the power to deadend the road
you are on at anytime and create
a new one. Well written......Mike |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 12:26:41 PM AEST
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a great thoughtful poem. .I like how this makes you think and its so indepth.. lovely job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 02:00:57 PM AEST
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I say, be yourself even if it hair lips the devil and it usesally does.
huggs, blessing,
emy |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by wheels on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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An excellent ponderance.
It i sdifficult being "the good child" so to speak. It is the good hearts that get hurt the most and the evil ones rendering thier wrath with self important, selfish use of others and painful cast of us aside. Evil seems the easy path but those people never truly see a tru beauty and never feel it in their heart. It is just unfortunate that we must suffer at their hands.
--Kevin
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Crow on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 01:15:18 PM AEST
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| Hi Brew" I`m late but i`m here. I agree with most here..sometimes we have to dance with the dark..good write my friend....Lane |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by wizard on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 05:02:59 AM AEST
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hey brew,
as always, a post done in your own unique way,
keep writing...
wiz |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:29:27 PM AEST
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Thoughtful and beautifuly innocent,
deeply moving, no one can be you
like you, and you are you, quite well.
((((dana))))
pops
Ben |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th September 2008 @ 10:48:43 AM AEST
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just keep being you, look at people and at life and when you see a quality you like you can adopt it in yourself, if it doesnt suit find a new idea, try things out and when they dont fit or you like them but arent ready, put the idea, style, way of life on the shelf till another time, just most importantly be happy and be you!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by englishprincej on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 10:06:44 PM AEST
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Hmmm, interesting....I'd go with the comments posted by Nessie.
Be true to yourself, you have to live with yourself. Yes, you'll hurt others, sometimes it's unavoidable.
If you only see the evil then you need to find support and strength from someone. Don't take people for granted, they won't always be there.
Learn and enjoy their company and wisdom while you can. |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 12:04:58 PM AEST
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Poets eyes see different from most. It's always so hard to balance your head with your heart.
May you find the right path. |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 06:43:19 PM AEST
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| take it form me fellow writer, you short lines here reach us all. this is a question of worldly importance, it is a valid thought and expressed in a stunning little piece here. just be always glad that you are alive. just breath, it is the source of life, be thankful for what yo have and have had, don't be sad., please, positive thinking overpowers evil,. thanks for this!!1 |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 07:02:57 AM AEST
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thought provoking ponderings. my personal thought is that since you take the time to ponder these things, you h must be on the right path. it may hurt, it may not always feel like it, but you are doing something right. i say this, because you do what you do with heart. thank you for these inspiring thoughts
love smiles and blessings
kara |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 07:07:47 PM AEST
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Brew that poetry in its purist form my friend, I'm so glad you made a comment on my work.
I know look forward reading more of ur thoughts put on paper.
~Bin~ |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 05:50:39 PM AEST
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Thought provoking and very well written!
Thanks for sharing Brew.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
~~Oceandreamer~~
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by Loende on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 08:02:54 PM AEST
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I'm so very late in getting, here...my apologies.
It would be a much kinder world if everyone asked this of themselves. You've managed to sum up what I believe is one of the greatest challenges in life: finding the balance between who we are and who the world wants us to be. I think that you'll find your poet's tender soul will do best on the narrow road.
Love is the greatest gift we can give to the world....even when it's not returned.
Lovely poem.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:18:34 AM AEST
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Keep being you and keep standing up for what you believe in. Evil wins when everyone turns a blind eye to it. The battle is ongoing, and there will be days of progression, and moments of regression. Keep pushing forward!
~Scorp |
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Re: WHICH way to go...Right, or Left?
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 12:04:12 PM AEST
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Just be YOU!!
fantastic write. i feel this way in life sometimes and you hit the nail on the head with your words!
just be you, always. and do what you think is right!
-Holder |
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