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your there, yet gone
I waited by your doorstep you never showed up
I waited in bitter vain these feelings for you I tried so hard to restrain...
but I can't resist you ever
Our ties I can't sever
will you truly go away forever?
Please don't make me face the world alone without you here
I'm already scared
hating myself
blaming myself for your leaving me

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you Left

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:38:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes I don't know what to make of anything
your there, yet gone
I waited by your doorstep you never showed up
I waited in bitter vain these feelings for you I tried so hard to restrain...
but I can't resist you ever
Our ties I can't sever
will you truly go away forever?
Please don't make me face the world alone without you here
I'm already scared
hating myself
blaming myself for your leaving me

*vampyress Jenni*

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Re: you Left (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 05:02:39 AM AEST
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Oh jenni - how anguished....

--Kevin
tha lonely vagabond

Re: you Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 05:10:11 AM AEST
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Touching write. Jen... but you must stop laying blame on yourself.....
Jenni

Re: you Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
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In time you'll grow strong like it or not it

happens your poetry is filled with the needed

passion to help your heart move in the right

direction, beautiful writting Jenn . . .

Ben

Re: you Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 02:09:15 AM AEST
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Touching write but I don't think you are to blame.
Life is what it chooses to be, some things we can't change

Steve

Re: you Left (User Rating: 1 )
by beautiful_letdowns on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 02:43:58 AM AEST
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It's so easy to blame ourselves for what others did to us... I know exactly where you are coming from on that note... I really enjoyed reading this piece, the pain was real and raw and you portrayed it with ease. Thanks for posting. I'm going to look at more of your work!

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