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Lying here on a pillow of sand,
Away from the cares of this world.
Surrounded only by coconut palms,
And by the man who loves this old girl.

School's out for the Summer vacation,
I'm back on my favorite beach.
Dreaming in eager anticipation,
Of the ecstasy within my reach.

Lesson plans are forgotten for now,
Examinations are out of my mind.
There's no one to put a frown on my brow,
No daily registers to be signed.

Only my love accompanies me today,
The one who is closest to my heart.
The one with whom I will forever stay,
And from whom I'll never be apart.

So I'm lying here on my pillow of sand,
My thoughts sometimes running free.
It often drifts to another land,
To a friend across a distant sea!

But before long I'm reminded of home,
And the one who loves me the best.
And once more my mind ceases to roam,
As he lays his hands on my breast.

He joins me now on my bed of white sand,
And tenderly gives me a kiss.
Lying this way with my love close at hand,
Certainly feels like bliss.

Soon we make love by the light of the moon,
As we lay upon this pure white sand.
We lie here together all afternoon,
Ain't being in love just grand!!!

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~Pillow Of Sand~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

~~^~~

Lying here on a pillow of sand,
Away from the cares of this world.
Surrounded only by coconut palms,
And by the man who loves this old girl.

School's out for the Summer vacation,
I'm back on my favorite beach.
Dreaming in eager anticipation,
Of the ecstasy within my reach.

Lesson plans are forgotten for now,
Examinations are out of my mind.
There's no one to put a frown on my brow,
No daily registers to be signed.

Only my love accompanies me today,
The one who is closest to my heart.
The one with whom I will forever stay,
And from whom I'll never be apart.

So I'm lying here on my pillow of sand,
My thoughts sometimes running free.
It often drifts to another land,
To a friend across a distant sea!

But before long I'm reminded of home,
And the one who loves me the best.
And once more my mind ceases to roam,
As he lays his hands on my breast.

He joins me now on my bed of white sand,
And tenderly gives me a kiss.
Lying this way with my love close at hand,
Certainly feels like bliss.

Soon we make love by the light of the moon,
As we lay upon this pure white sand.
We lie here together all afternoon,
Ain't being in love just grand!!!

~~^~~

Copyright © Jenni_K ... [ 2008-07-14 04:01:07]
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Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:40:36 AM AEST
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a very passionate intense expressive write of love here. I really liked this write.. its very enchanting.. makes me wanna go to the beach

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 05:00:53 AM AEST
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what a touching poem. soo sweet.

--Kevin

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:20:04 AM AEST
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nice write jenni,

sounds like a great time..

wiz

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 07:07:14 AM AEST
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spicy glad you are getting some needed R & R

Shari

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 01:31:46 AM AEST
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Ahh a nice cool flow
sweet......

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 04:48:25 AM AEST
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wow.. you can tell that poem was written with the heart. Thats Amore!!

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 09:41:45 AM AEST
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Ain't being in love just grand!!!
yes it is and so is this poem
enjoy your summer Jenni K . . .

Thank you for your read also . . .

Ben

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Sylvias on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:34:15 PM AEST
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First of all I would like to say that I absolutely love the title of this piece. As soon as I saw it I immediately wanted to read your poem. However I believe that the title of this poem would have a much better impact if you didn't repeat the line in the body of your poem, repeating it just detracts from the power of the phrase.

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:05:33 AM AEST
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Sounds like a beautiful beach. Great job here.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 06:35:12 AM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful and romantic!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: ~Pillow Of Sand~ (User Rating: 1 )
by MemeCaroline on Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:06:21 AM AEST
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I love the title! This poem makes me wish that my hubby and I were somewhere on a far away beach, away from the horrible economic situation in America, away from the tension over the coming election, and away from thoughts of war! Maybe if we all would lay our heads on a pillow of sand every once in a while, the world would not be in the condition it is today. Now...what beach was that?

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