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Array ( [sid] => 14386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fallen [time] => 2003-03-17 06:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
Such a disgrace,
My wings are no more...

You said you would catch me,
You gave me your word,
I gave you my heart,
Then I gave up my world.
And I can't understand it,
I can't comprehend..
Why was I so blind?
Why won't my heart mend?

Do you see...?
This love that you've wounded,
It's too much to take.
I've slipped through your fingers,
You've let my heart break.

I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
It's such a disgrace,
My wings are no more... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ravenblack_phoenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Fallen

Contributed by ravenblack_phoenix on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
Such a disgrace,
My wings are no more...

You said you would catch me,
You gave me your word,
I gave you my heart,
Then I gave up my world.
And I can't understand it,
I can't comprehend..
Why was I so blind?
Why won't my heart mend?

Do you see...?
This love that you've wounded,
It's too much to take.
I've slipped through your fingers,
You've let my heart break.

I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
It's such a disgrace,
My wings are no more...

Copyright © ravenblack_phoenix ... [ 2003-03-17 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:07:19 AM AEST
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So sad..but so beautifully written.. Hope you fly high again...soon...
Jenni

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:17:04 AM AEST
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wow! it is really heart rending. venkat

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:23:37 AM AEST
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excellent! i love this poem!

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:39:02 AM AEST
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What a brilliant poem. So moving..... Good work!!

sleepless_siren

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:40:23 AM AEST
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Wow! Great write!

"You said you would catch me,
You gave me your word,
I gave you my heart,
Then I gave up my world. "

Excellent! Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by undead_poet14 on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 10:46:13 AM AEST
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absolutely wonderful poem! i really liked it... This touched me deeply... you're a great writer... ^^

The Undead Poet

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Varro on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:02:07 PM AEST
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Nice imagery and deep emotion. I was moved by it. This is how poetry should affect the senses! Good job.

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:32:38 PM AEST
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Very well written. Emotional write. I enjoyed it!!
Michelle

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 08:13:14 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT!
your words are beautiful.

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