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Array ( [sid] => 143847 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Forbidden love untouched~ [time] => 2008-07-12 05:39:56 [hometext] => a mixture of undertones enjoy cowrite Michelle/ Rich [bodytext] => Dare we take the step down the opaque path?

Mixing our desires and our spiraling lust

Sweet kiss, oh yes, sinful poison from the moment

We surrender into fate; as the devil awaits smiling at the gate.



Secret moments stolen with brief encounters

Deliverance of two souls’ unrequited love

Adorned by the dance of passion, fanciful

Melting the petals round us, intense fire of passion.



Under the light of midnight’s sun

Within the embrace of a wanton need

As shadowing oak and pine keep a watchful eye

Whispering love’s sweet melody upon the autumn breeze.



Enthralled hearts bound by love and lust become the symbol of ideal unification

No longer to fear as they sail upon a sea pure rapture and ecstasy

Basking in their evanescent glow as they rest in the fragrance of roses and morning glories

Surrendering to the moment, dreading the coming of morning’s first light. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
~Forbidden love untouched~

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 05:39:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Dare we take the step down the opaque path?

Mixing our desires and our spiraling lust

Sweet kiss, oh yes, sinful poison from the moment

We surrender into fate; as the devil awaits smiling at the gate.



Secret moments stolen with brief encounters

Deliverance of two souls’ unrequited love

Adorned by the dance of passion, fanciful

Melting the petals round us, intense fire of passion.



Under the light of midnight’s sun

Within the embrace of a wanton need

As shadowing oak and pine keep a watchful eye

Whispering love’s sweet melody upon the autumn breeze.



Enthralled hearts bound by love and lust become the symbol of ideal unification

No longer to fear as they sail upon a sea pure rapture and ecstasy

Basking in their evanescent glow as they rest in the fragrance of roses and morning glories

Surrendering to the moment, dreading the coming of morning’s first light.




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-12 05:39:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 06:23:58 AM AEST
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This might be one of the better ones that we have written. Flowed very well together...Our ability to write together like this is almost a bit uncanny. I have to say that this is as beautiful as it is intense sensual. Thank you for writing with me yet again.

Rich


Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 10:21:57 AM AEST
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Michell/Rich,

I feel the heat from this one.
Deep with wantoness.

Awesome write...........Mike


Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~ (User Rating: 1 )
by KismetsPoet on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. Very passionate.
Great job.


Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:25:28 AM AEST
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a enchanting marvelous passionate deep felt write.. this is just great!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: ~Forbidden love untouched~ (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:02:41 AM AEST
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You two captured a rapture of emotion in here damn it.
Great work

me




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