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Array ( [sid] => 143843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~ Remembering~ [time] => 2008-07-12 02:48:45 [hometext] => Miles away the journey is proceding to the cemetary , Goodbye Uncle Dale [bodytext] => In thought and soft whisper I am saying goodbye.
Can you hear me? Feel my hand light on yours?

I remember your smile, the laughter that rang high into the Heavens.
Catching everyone with it and taking us along.

I remember the sparkle in your eyes, the wink and hugs freely given.
I remember love, my dear sweet man, love that enfolds around me.

I remember tears, goodbyes, hearts making a mend, some wounds never died.
I remember a great ditch rescue, saving me from floating away.

I remember you dear man, I miss you, my morning Dove is outside singing
A lonely melody that is resting in my ears, my heart.

I remember your sweet nature and the strength you silently gave
I remember words unspoken yet the message was clear as the Idaho summer skies.

I remember you today, wishing I was there, to bid you farewell on your new journey.
I remember from a distance and my heart sits heavy, I laugh through tears because I know, you smile now.

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~ Remembering~

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 02:48:45 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In thought and soft whisper I am saying goodbye.
Can you hear me? Feel my hand light on yours?

I remember your smile, the laughter that rang high into the Heavens.
Catching everyone with it and taking us along.

I remember the sparkle in your eyes, the wink and hugs freely given.
I remember love, my dear sweet man, love that enfolds around me.

I remember tears, goodbyes, hearts making a mend, some wounds never died.
I remember a great ditch rescue, saving me from floating away.

I remember you dear man, I miss you, my morning Dove is outside singing
A lonely melody that is resting in my ears, my heart.

I remember your sweet nature and the strength you silently gave
I remember words unspoken yet the message was clear as the Idaho summer skies.

I remember you today, wishing I was there, to bid you farewell on your new journey.
I remember from a distance and my heart sits heavy, I laugh through tears because I know, you smile now.

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Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 02:54:56 AM AEST
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Memories sweet sweet memories
beautifully flowing
well done.

Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:38:04 AM AEST
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That is what he would want you to do...remember all of the good times that you two shared and how he was when you were able to be with him. Your memories will keep him close to your heart until you are able to be with him once more. You did a beautiful job as always.

HUGS upon HUGS
Rich

Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:55:48 AM AEST
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In your memories he lives on...lovely musings from a talented lady

Hugs
Shari

Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:12:01 PM AEST
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He heard that Michelle - he is smiling.

--Kevin

Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:23:48 AM AEST
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wow this is just so beautiful.. this is sad yet lovely.. God rest his soul.. Im sure he would love this..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~ Remembering~ (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:05:18 AM AEST
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Darlin I am saddened to hear this news. I was thinking about him a couple weeks ago thought above stoppin in to say hello and the load was changed.
He will smile at this one, what a great man. I know you loved him dearly.

so sorry.
flowers and hugs
Me

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